The Crush of a life time.

This is a Ron/Hermione Harry/Ginny fan fiction. I originally planned no Voldemort but I have decided to include Horcruxes. Please send feedback. Also this is my try at Fan Fiction and I am only 10 so I am looking for many tips.
DISCLAIMER: I am not JK Rowling nor do I own any of her characters.

Harry entered 12 Grimmalud Place with a smile on his face. "Ello Ginny" He said grinning at her "How was your first 2 weeks of summer?"
Ginny looked up at him with a pounding heart. The first time she had seen him all summer. The first time since they broke up.
"Fine" she replied "and yours"
"Not that well. But it that is how I always feel at the Dursley's" he said "Where are Hermione and Ron?" he asked after along silence.
"Upstairs" Ginny said in a questionable tone.
Harry walked to the room where he and Ron slept. He opened the door to find Ron and Hermione in front of the door.
"Oi!" he said laughing as Ron and Hermione broke apart. Harry noticed that Hermione was sporting a bright scarlet face while Ron looked rather pleased with himself.

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CHAPTER 2: Too long Waited
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Hermione quickly got on her feet and left muttering something about having to go.
"Hullo Harry" Ron said with a twinge of embarrassment. "I see you are back early."
"Yeah." Harry said "So... how long have you been you know, together?"
"A week" Ron said.
Harry had scared Ron. He and Hermione had planned on having him find out a different way.
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Hermione dropped into a chair in the kitchen.
"Morning Ginny" she said still glowing red.
"I am guessing Harry found you guys snogging"
"So you sent him."
"I can't help it if he wanted to see his friends"
Harry and Ron stepped down the stairs and made the way into the basement.
"When are you going to tell him?" Hermione asked
"What" Ginny replied
"I saw how you were looking at Harry."
Ginny looked around as though she hadn't heard
"Ginny!"
"He wants to keep me safe Hermione!"
"He can't be noble all the time Gin"
Ginny turned around and walked up stairs just Ron and Harry came up.

CHAPTER 3 On the verge of truth:
Ron pulled himself into the chair next to Hermione and grasped her hand tightly.
"What's wrong with Ginny" Harry asked looking at Hermione
"I don't know she just left" Hermione said trying to sound as if she was not lying
"Well I am going up to bed. Good night."
"What really happened" Ron asked when Harry was out of earshot.
"Ginny still likes Harry... a lot"
"My little sister shouldn't be liking anyone" he said
"Oh Ronald!" Hermione said playfully punching him.
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Ginny laid upstairs alone in the room she and Hermione shared.
Is it that obvious I still like him? she thought.
Ginny had always liked Harry. When they finally got together she was so happy. But then they split.
I knew that was going to happen. Harry is so noble. That is why I love him.she thought for the millionth time that hour.
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Harry knew Hermione was lying. He knew he hurt Ginny somehow and Hermione wasn't telling him.
I guess she isn't over what happened between us. I still love her
Harry had to talk to her and soon.
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Ron playfully punched her back and then leaned in to kiss her.
"Goodnight my love" He said walking up the stairs as Hermione gazed longingly after him.

CHAPTER 4A pound of lead
Harry jolted awake as his dream floated through his mind. His heart pounded at top speed he was about to scream.
"Just a nightmare" he muttered to himself.
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In the ministry of magic Voldemort had has wand pointed at me. It was cold and dark. I searched for my wand to realize that it was lying feet away from my outstretched arm. When suddenly he shouted
"Avada Kedavra" I shut my eyes close as something fell over my body and I went limp and cold. It was over. He had won.
Harry told Ron and Hermione.
"That was my dream." Harry said still quivering.
"Bloody Scary" Ron said.
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Around noon of that same day Harry and Ron walked up stairs to the room Hermione and Ginny shared.
"We have to go" Hermione said nudging Ron with her elbow
Ron cursed in pain and then left with Hermione.
"Er... Hello Ginny"
"Hi" Ginny said coldly.
"I am sorry-"
"What is over is over and what has happened is done" Ginny said in a way that told Harry to leave.
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Ron and Hermione sat on one of the grimy couches that laid sloppily all around the room.
"We only have one more week before we have to go back for the wedding" Ron said trying to sound positive as Hermione eyed one of the rats that were scurrying across the room
"This place still disgusts me" Hermione said in a girlish tone

CHAPTER 5 The journey ahead
Harry let out a sigh as he entered his room. He knew he couldn't worry about his love life now. He had to worry about his dream. He wanted to prevent what he saw from happening.
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Holding hands Ron and Hermione started a moonlight walk. They both knew this wouldn't be able to happen much more. They would be to busy keeping their promise out in the world with Harry.
All was going well when suddenly "AVADA KEDARVA" came from the bushes. Thinking quickly Hermione pulled them both put of the way. Their hearts beat wildly.
"I love you Ron"
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Cliffhanger... who do you think did it... why didn't Ron answer... was it really Harry who died in his dream or someone else? All these questions will be answered by the last post.