Feedback - Anya

This is the feedback thread for my new story Anya. So what do you all think of it?

I liked it :tu:
But as a writer and reader I can see that you were missing some elements and details and it was mostly dialogue.
I don't think I am right, but it looks like you wrote because you had nothing more to do. I don't really think that was the reason.
Perhaps you had to think in more fluid ideas, before writing.:p

Apart from it, I like it.:cool:

I'm glad you did. I actually wrote this when I was... 10, maybe 11, for school. Don't remember what grade I got, but I know it wasn't an A. :lol: