Feedback - Emily Reynolds - "Survival"

Whoops. Forgot to start a feedback thread. Hope you enjoy the First Chapter. All critique's, comments, suggestions are welcome.

Enjoy!

-Tibbetts

Hiya!! I liked Em... she was cool. But boy howdy Chp 1 was long...... :D
I cant wait for Chp 3!!

Yeah, 'twas a little long. Had a lot of info to get through. Following chapters are, hopefully, a little smaller. :p

Glad ya liked it! :D


-Tibbetts

I've updated Chapters 1 + 2 in my story thread. Hopefully, it's an improvement.

Enjoy!


-Tibbetts

First draft of Chapter 3 is up, and a revision of Ch. 2 has also been posted.


-Tibbetts