J/L Fan Fiction- At Last

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SUM:
J/L love story (of course) their last year at Hogwarts (7th) Both head boy and head girl. They are the top of their class (of course).
I hope you like my FF I think its my first... lol
Well the first chapter is here...
Now you have to be patient with me because I might not be able to write for a while.

Thanks, I hope you like it.

The station at Kings Cross was packed, Lily was had just finnished saying good buy to her parents when her hand was pulled.
It was James he swept her into his arms and started to kiss her.
"No not here, people don't know," Lily exclaimed with a giggle.
"Trust me every girl knows that James isn't available, it seems every girl at Hogwarts is giving you the evil eye Lils," Sirius said as he walked up to Lily to give her a hearty hand shake.
"Wow, you actually shook my hand, I'm honored Sirius, you were so cold over the summer," Lily laughed.
"Yeh, that was only because my parents found you in my room with James all over you!" Sirius explained. "I was grounded for the last week of the holidays," Lily blushed and James gave a sly smile.

Things had changed, James thought, he now had he girl of his dreams, he was head boy and she was head girl, they would have to be spending long tiring nights patroling the hall in the dark... mmm this year could be looking good.

Lily snapped him out of his reverie by telling him to get his butt over on the train.
"In a sec, save us a seat," James looked a Sirius with a grinn.
"Ready, ok just like we talked about ok? Where the hell in Moony?" James said.
"Here," Moony yelled from behind him.
"Sorry mate, ready?"
"Yeh, are you sure you want to do this, you may miss the train?" Moony said plainly.
"Go the trains leaving!" Sirius yelled.
James and Sirius started to run to catch up to the train, this was their last year to show off, it was risky but well worth it.

James jumped on to the side of the last carriage with Sirius close behind, they made their way to the door and clambered in, as a last effect James pointed his want out the door and send a whole load of fireworks out the end of his wand, it was still quite a grey morining so their bright colours shone through the windows.
Sirius did the same but when his fireworks when out of his wand the sparks formed lthe words
'JAMES POTTER IS GOING OUT WITH LILY EVANS' and floated to every window, so that not one person would miss their message.

Lily was a compartment with her friends Jani and Decan they were just talking when the fireworks shone from their window.
"Aww Lil look what those two did! It's so cute, how on earth did ou catch him, James I mean?" Jani signed and looked at Decan fondly, she had a huge crush on him but as Lily kept telling Jani, he didn't NOT like her, he just hadn't SEEN her yet.
"I don't know but I hope he's on the train, you don't think they missed it while doing their prank do you?" Lily asked, Jani looked shocked.
"Na, Sirius and James are the smartest guys in school only they could pull this off and still catch the train, they'll be here." Decan said coolly. Lily didn't understand how chicks went for Decan, but they did and he seemed to be always with a date just like the Maraulders.

"Thank G*D your here," Jani said dreamily, she was still looking at Decan.
"Yeh, you like the show?" Sirius asked with a grin.
Before anyone could answer James asked Lily for a few words out in the corridor.
"Yeh, sure" Lily said with a smile on her face, every time James asked her to talk they talk for hours hour and always ended up lip locked.
James lead Lily out of the compartment.
"Oh Lils..." James said with passion as he reached for her hand.
"I know it's been like a whole summer apart," Lily said effectionatly and she pulled James closer.

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"I know it's been like a whole summer apart," Lily said effectionatly and she pulled James closer.
James smiled at her.
"I love it when you make the first move," he grinned.
"Everyone in the corridors are going to see us," Lily blushed pullling him away.
"I don't care, I love you and it's going to be our first kiss since last year,"
He leaned closer and gently kissed her sweet lips, it was a soft kiss, she put her hand in his back jean pockets drawing him closer to her body.
Heat radiated from the couple, if anyone had walked passed at that moment they would have felt the electical sirge that was flowing from both of them.
They broke apart breathing heavely, Lily closed her eyes with a smile on her lips.
"I've missed you," Lily said as she put her hands through his messy hair and pulled his head closer to hers.
"Kiss me again," Lily whispered.
This kiss was with with more ergency he erged his tounge into her mouth, Lily's mind was blown it was amazing, how could she have left this guy for a whole summer without seeing him?
James pulled her against the carriage moving his hand up Lily's back making her sudder.
A first year was passing and ran past them, Lily broke apart and started laughing.
"G*d did you see that kid? Poor thing, he's not ment to see that stuff untill he's... well you know... old enough,"James laughed and pulled her head close to her's ready for another kiss.
"We should get back in, they'll be missing us," Lily whispered.

"Right you two, didn't you hear whats happening this upcoming Halloween?" Decan asked as he drew his girlfriend closer to him.
"Who's this?" Lily asked giving Jani a worried looked.
"Jessica Mariee, Jess this is the gang, getting back to the Halloween thing, who are you going with James? As head boy you might want to choose someone cute," Decan said a little too harshly.
"Decan, now I've met your girlfriend, meet mine, Lil this is the slime ball Decan," James said giving Decan an icy stare.
"James it's ok, I don't care, truely it's fine," Lily said gently pushing James back.
"No it's no ok, he just insulted you,"James yelled as he grabbed Decan by the collar and shoved him against the wall, pulling his wand out into a thretening position.
"Say your sorry or your going to pay, NOW," James yelled and his wand gave off sparks.
"Ok I'm sorry Lil, I didn't meen it that way, sorry, now cool out mate, no offence ok," Decan said in a small voice.
Jani and Jess were just sitting there with shocked faces, but Sirius was grinning proudly at James.
Jess left the carriage in a huff muttering something like, 'wimp.'
"Thanks I actually liked her you know," Decan said angrily as he stratened his robes.
"James we better get dressed were neally at Hogwarts, come on," Lily said sofly as she grabbed a small velvet bad and ushured everyong out as it was too cramped to get changed.

When the door shut Lily said,
"turn around while I change my shirt," James smiled.
"What and deniy me the plessure of seeing the hottest girl on the planet?" He laughed and turned around.


To be continued...




Sorry it's a bit corny but I think it's romantic... you just have to imagin that they have been fighting for years and that now they got together AT LAST!!!
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James and Lily had gone off to do their head boy and girl duties and Remus had gone off to find Katie to talk about the book he had just borrowed off his Grandma.
Sirius and Jani were both looking at each other with akward looks.
"Um, we better get a carriage befor there all gone,"Jani said at last.
"Yeh," Sirius said as he stared at Jani.

By the time James and Lily had entered the carriage, Sirius and Jani had been talking for a while.
"So what did you talk about? I hope you didn't bore her Sirius?" Lily asked sarcasticly.
"No for your information, we were talking about Quidditch, and... other... other things," Sirius stumbled as he looked into Jani's grey eyes.
"Well you two will be spending heeps of time with each other, I'm counting you to look after Jani for me Sirius," Lily joked.
"I will," Lily and James were taken aback by this statement but said nothing.

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James, Lily, Sirius, Remus, Decan and Jani all filed on to the platfrom at Hogsmead. They were now the oldest in the school and ready to rule. Lily had losen up and wasn't so sricked and hard working, she even let her hair down... really she did, even though she has to put a straightning spell on it every morrning.
Everyone made a clear path for the 'cool' group to get through to the best carriages, it was like a tradition that all the school had, let the 'cool' group get the best. Then the 'evil' group got the next best carriages, If you didn;t let them through, you'd be fried. They might be evil but they have lots of power, the only people game enough to stand up to them is the 'cool' people and the crazy people!

James and Lily left for the common room with Remus but Sirius and Jani stayed rooted to the spot. Jani took one look at Sirius and ran into the girls bathroom.
Jani looked at her reflection... pale and drawn, she hadn't gotten much sleep this summer, thinking about... well never mind... this year it will be different.

Lily giggled as she walked into James dorm room... she turned to James and looked into his eyes, what she saw made her look away.
"What is it," James asked with consern as he sat Lily down on his bed.
Lily looked at her feet and twisted her hands in her lap untill James placed a gentle hand on hers.
"I...I don't know what you want," Lily stammered as she pulled away from James and stood at the window.
"I want you," was all James said reaching out for Lily and placing a hand on her cheak.
"All I want is you, nothing else," he kissed her gently.
"But what do you want from me, Im getting scared James, Im getting scared that you want more from me and.. and that I won't be able to give it to you," Lily said as she pulled away.
"I just want you to be happy, I don' t want a serious relationship if you don't, I care what you think and Im not about to push you into something that I know you don't want to be pushed into. For eg. coming with me to my house over the break," James said the last part unusually fast.
"James... I... yes," Lily said before any other thought came into her head.
"Lil, are you sure?" James said carfuly as he stepped closer to Lily.
"Yes," was all Lily said.
James rapped his arms around Lily and drew her closer to his body, the kiss was light and gentle, after awhile he became more ergent and Lily fell onto the his bed. And before anyone knew what was happening, Lily moved her hand up James back, feeling every bone and muscle. G*d he's hot Lily thought as she moved her had away from James, James gave out a grone as she pulled her hand away.
"No," he whispered.
"I have to go," Lily said as she pulled her shirt down, which had by now gone up just under her chest.
"I'll see you tonight though, same time?" Lily asked as she got up.
"Yes I woudn't miss it," James said as he spralled over his bed.
Lily walked over to the door and walked out with a silent promise on her lips.
Tonight it will be different.

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ok... i've just read this story and i have to admit it's not that great!! I might edit it if I have time... and put some more... 'readable' stuff in... seriously I'm a way way way way better writer than this... mind you i was pretty young then... *cough*... mm... well I'll get to work then... hehe