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Muddgutts
September 10th, 2003, 10:00 pm
Cornered and with no chance of escape . . .
His last attempt to avenge his father’s death and the downfall of his family gone…
Draco was unarmed and unmasked.
Ron had him by the throat and showed no signs off letting go, “I have you now Malfoy, you bloody coward! Thought you’d pop in on the wedding did you. Where’s your gift?”
“otter . . . I . .chall. ..”
Harry turned slowly, not releasing Hermione from his embrace. She was trying to clean the blood from his check. “What…Ron, ease up on him. You don’t want to go with him to Azcanban do you?” Harry kissed Hermione on the forehead and passed her over to Snape, with an agreeing nod.
Draco coughed and rubbed the bruises on his neck, “Oh well I’m sorry Potter for dropping in on you and the Mudblood here, but we have unfinished business first.”
“What are you talking about?”
“Don’t you remember our second year at Hogworts? We started a dual that we never finished?”
“Your mad Draco, you know you can’t…”
“The Challenge still stands Potter!. .. Don’t you walk away! These are our laws! Once the Dual starts it must be finished.” I have the right as an only child to a Pure Blood house to reclaim my family honor. That you destroyed!” Draco was screaming into Harry’s face. Harry turned to Hermione her face washed as white as her wedding dress. Snape was staring hard into Harrys eyes. He could hear Snapes thoughts clear as day, “Finish this Harry or he’ll never leave you two alone.” Harry nodded and turned to Draco, “Your on!”
“This is to the Death Potter…”
“No…Harry please don’t!” Hermione screamed.
“Finish this wanker Harry I’m getting hungry.” Ron yelled from Hermione’s side.

“To the Death it is then.”

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Hello everyone. Chapter one is up at FanFiction.net The title is
Harry Potter and the Chapter House Destiny
link: Chapter House Destiny (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1521114)

TheDarkMark
September 11th, 2003, 2:40 am
That's really cool. Nice even tone on the colors and can't wait to hear who wins.

Michie19
September 11th, 2003, 4:12 am
That's really cool! I like! hehehe lol. Hey I have more chapters done if you want to read them. bye!

Muddgutts
September 11th, 2003, 4:34 am
thanks michie. yeah I've been a bit crazy lately. I saw all your new chapters. WOW :wow: I'm reading them tonight.

Michie19
September 11th, 2003, 4:40 am
I think everyone out there has been living in a crazy world lately. I am too. Been busy and stuff. But somehow I managed to add a bunch of chapters. 22 & 23 are my favorite ones right now. It was like lighning hit me and I was flooded with all these ideas. Deep ideas. Hope you like what I've written.

LakerGirl
September 11th, 2003, 7:25 am
Wow! That is an amazing drawing! Awesome job! :tu:

Inkwolf
September 11th, 2003, 1:31 pm
Ooh! Very cool pic (and scenario!) :)

vagos
September 11th, 2003, 3:35 pm
really cool pic.how old are they supposed to be?draco looks exactly like his father :D

Muddgutts
September 11th, 2003, 4:59 pm
really cool pic.how old are they supposed to be?draco looks exactly like his father :D

Well I was thinking about a 4 years after Hogworts. This was the brain-fart I had. Volty is gone (I think?). But not with out a cost many of the people in Harrys life are pasted away in the fight. Harry, Ron, and Hermione are all Aurors now. Snape has had a total change of heart after a big event, and acts of a kind of uncle now to the trio. L. Malfoy is dead and the whole family disgraced. Draco fled the UK to plot his revenage, to return on H/Hr wedding day to call him out in a dual to the death. Based a 500 year old law, if he beats harry his family status can be restored. athough Harry was destined to beat Voltimort it doesn't mean that Draco can't kill. oh the tension...blah blah blah...anyway that was how I thought of the scene. It still need work, background, deeper shadows and junk. I'll update it someday.

Thanks Vagos

Fleur02
September 12th, 2003, 4:44 pm
That's really good :agree: !!!!! Draco really reminds me of Lucious in the second film! And I like the style of shirt Harry's wearing - very 16th century-esque (a word I just made up!)!! Is the text part of a fan fic??? If so is it on this site, and what's it called? - I really wanna know what happens next!! :D :) Plus I can't wait to see this picture once you've added a backround and more detail!

Muddgutts
September 12th, 2003, 5:56 pm
Hmm well if people are interested in it. I well post it in the fiction section. Look for it Monday or Tuesday next week. Ok now i have to really work on this story. I have about 3 works in progress. But I like this one so I'll get the first chapters ready this weekend.
:welcome:

Eruanna
September 12th, 2003, 11:43 pm
wow! thats really cool! :) harry's shirt is really cool too...

Jinxie Cat
September 13th, 2003, 6:08 am
Wow! I really love how you added a story with the picture! It really created a tone and the perfect mood! Awesome! :tu:

big_cho_fan
September 13th, 2003, 6:50 am
Great work as always, I really like how you made both of them ruffed up gives it a nice feeling.

Muddgutts
September 14th, 2003, 8:31 pm
Thanks every one for your nice crit. I've been thinking about this all weekend. The more I dug into the reasons behind the scene and the events that lead charcters to this moment really go my head spinning. So after about 3 days and a ton of smokes and coffee. I'm ready the firsts 2 chapters will be posted here and must likely Fanfiction.net as well. I don't have a title at the moment, but I'll leave a link in this thread later.

Thank you to everyone :welcome:

Cheetah
September 15th, 2003, 4:47 am
That is really nice. I thought it was Lucius at first, but then read on. :cool:

BabyMars
October 17th, 2003, 7:52 am
i really like this. i think harry's side burns are a little much, but I do like how their clothing reflects which side they are one. A little too much blood on harry's face too. Other than that, it's beautiful.

Sarmi
October 19th, 2003, 4:16 pm
The preview for the fic sounds great. *clicks on the link* I'll read it after this! Ugh, the link doesn't work. It says story not found.

As for you picture, it looks great too. I guess I have to read the fic to know why Harry has a cut on his face.

Great work though!

Sarmi