mekell
September 28th, 2003, 3:42 am
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Lily Evans
Lily sat pondering over her charms homework in the Gryffendor Common Room. She was angry. James Potter and his rowdy friends would not be quiet. She longed to scream at them to "Shut up!", but felt it wouldnt be polite as she usually was.
Lily's friend, Alice, and her boyfriend, Frank Longbottom, were sitting near her. Alice had just told Frank a joke and he was laughing fit to burst. Lily found her self wishing she could skip homework and sit with them but she never left homework behind and wasn't going to start just then.
"Moony!' called James Potter as Lily began to write down an aswer. It startled her so band the answer smumged and was not legible.
Lily gritted her teeth. "Potter!" she called. "You need to keep it down. I'm trying to study!"
"Sorry... Proffessor Evans." he mocked. "You are worse than Mcgonagle some times."
Lily threw an angry look at him and went back to homework. Flitwick was cracking down this year and she was worried about her grades.
Sirius Black, a friend of James's, was now mocking Lily from the other side of the room. "Quiet! Quiet!" he called in a high pitched voice.
Lily picked up her books and walked up to her dorm. Could they never be quiet? She just wanted an O on her OWL's but she thought it nearly impossible with them around.
Alice came up a moment later.
"Did he finish mocking me?" Lily asked her.
"Uh... well... Frank asked him to stop." Alice said.
Lily sighed. She finished marking number three on her work and looked up at Alice. "Why are some boys such dorks?" she asked. "Frank is okay but Potter and them are so... so..."
"Normal?" Alice suggested.
Lily looked at her.
"Most boys are that way." said Alice. "At least at our age."
"I wish they weren't." Lily anwered.
"Me too, but we can't change it." Alice sighed. "How's Flitwick's homework coming?" she asked.
"Alright I suppose." Lily anwered.
"I finished mine already." said Alice. "I had a bit of trouble on number seven."
"I'm only on number four." said Lily. "Flitwick is cracking down this year. I think the OWL will be a dreadful mess."
"What are you worried about?" asked Alice. "You always make the highest grades on everything you do."
Lily blushed.
"I'm going to bed." Alice continued. "I'm tired."
"Alright then." said Lily.
Alice fell aslieep in a matter of minutes.
Lily finished her homework and leaned on her pallows. Her eyes slowly closed and she felt how long the day had been. she fell asleep fully clothed and didn't awake for many hours.
Lily Evans
Lily sat pondering over her charms homework in the Gryffendor Common Room. She was angry. James Potter and his rowdy friends would not be quiet. She longed to scream at them to "Shut up!", but felt it wouldnt be polite as she usually was.
Lily's friend, Alice, and her boyfriend, Frank Longbottom, were sitting near her. Alice had just told Frank a joke and he was laughing fit to burst. Lily found her self wishing she could skip homework and sit with them but she never left homework behind and wasn't going to start just then.
"Moony!' called James Potter as Lily began to write down an aswer. It startled her so band the answer smumged and was not legible.
Lily gritted her teeth. "Potter!" she called. "You need to keep it down. I'm trying to study!"
"Sorry... Proffessor Evans." he mocked. "You are worse than Mcgonagle some times."
Lily threw an angry look at him and went back to homework. Flitwick was cracking down this year and she was worried about her grades.
Sirius Black, a friend of James's, was now mocking Lily from the other side of the room. "Quiet! Quiet!" he called in a high pitched voice.
Lily picked up her books and walked up to her dorm. Could they never be quiet? She just wanted an O on her OWL's but she thought it nearly impossible with them around.
Alice came up a moment later.
"Did he finish mocking me?" Lily asked her.
"Uh... well... Frank asked him to stop." Alice said.
Lily sighed. She finished marking number three on her work and looked up at Alice. "Why are some boys such dorks?" she asked. "Frank is okay but Potter and them are so... so..."
"Normal?" Alice suggested.
Lily looked at her.
"Most boys are that way." said Alice. "At least at our age."
"I wish they weren't." Lily anwered.
"Me too, but we can't change it." Alice sighed. "How's Flitwick's homework coming?" she asked.
"Alright I suppose." Lily anwered.
"I finished mine already." said Alice. "I had a bit of trouble on number seven."
"I'm only on number four." said Lily. "Flitwick is cracking down this year. I think the OWL will be a dreadful mess."
"What are you worried about?" asked Alice. "You always make the highest grades on everything you do."
Lily blushed.
"I'm going to bed." Alice continued. "I'm tired."
"Alright then." said Lily.
Alice fell aslieep in a matter of minutes.
Lily finished her homework and leaned on her pallows. Her eyes slowly closed and she felt how long the day had been. she fell asleep fully clothed and didn't awake for many hours.