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MaNdA_MaLfOy
September 28th, 2003, 2:49 pm
Hi everyone...this is my first Fanfic...I hope you like it...Please read and respond!

Rating: PG
Spoilers: In later chapters, OotP
Shipper: Jen/Harry; Draco/Jen; Draco/Hermione; Ron/Hermione
Summary: A new girl shows up and changes the lives of everyone!

Chapter 1

"Right then, everyone ready?" Arthur Weasley said as he turned around to face the witches and wizards surrounding him. Staring blankly back at him were his wife, Molly, his sons, Fred, George, and Ron, his daughter, Ginny, and Harry and Hermione as well. They were standing in front of giant muggle amusement park called, 'Universal Studios'.

"Um, dad...are you sure about this? I mean, us wizards...we're not supposed to be meddling with the muggles or their world." Fred asked.

"Fred, everything will be all right. We have Harry here with us now, and he'll make sure that we don't make fools of ourselves. He can handle them muggles by himself, now can't ya mate?" Arthur turned to Harry.

Harry felt all eyes turn on him. He slightly smiled and nodded his head. He was actually beaming with happiness inside of him. For the past two in a half months, he had been sitting at home with the Dursleys. Finally, he recieved an owl from Ron asking him if he would spend the night with the Weasley family and Hermione. Of course, knowing that they shouldn't mess with wizards, yet with much regret, the Dursleys allowed Harry to go.

Harry was overly-excited to be spending the night with two of his best friends. But he has no idea that Mr. Weasley had decided to take a tour of the muggle world.

"We must buy something here, as a souvenir, for Patrick." Arthur started. "I'm just happy we have a friend like him. It isn't every day a wizard gets to travel to France for the holiday! And to think, he allowed us to travel by Floo Powder to his fireplace so we could have a holiday in the muggle world as well. It's a shame he couldn't come with us today...anyway, right then. Off you go Harry, pay for us with these...green papers." He pushed Harry toward the ticket booth.

After Harry payed for the group, they entered the 'magical' studio of muggles. Enjoying every minute of it, Harry, Ron, and Hermione began pointing to amusing muggles artifacts.

"Blimey, look at that Harry!" Ron exclaimed. "It looks like a giant, steel, silver world!" Harry looked as a rotating model of the earth, with a sign around it stating, "Universal Studios" went around as well.

"Bloody Hell, do people REALLY live in there?" George asked.

"No, no, no..."Harry shook his head.

"Oh, picture! We must take a picture!" Molly Weasley gestured as she lightly pushed her family and two guests in the front of the giant world. Smiling, and with a click of the camera, they headed deeper into park.

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"Oh, oh, and did you see when that giant fish popped out of the water? Even though it seemed burnt to a crisp?!?! Bloody hell, I also whipped out my wand!" Ron exclaimed, as they stood on the line for a stage performance.

"First of all, it would be extremely stupid of you if you took out your wand, Ron. Once again, you aren't even the SLIGHTEST bit concerned of revealed our world!" Hermione pointed out.

"I am, too!" Ron defended himself, slightly growing red in the ears.

"And second of all! That giant fish you call it? Well, anyone smart enough would know that they are called sharks. That ride, "Jaws" was quite entertaining!" Hermione nodded.

"Well, Hermione! Sharks, Darks, whatever they're called...I don't care. I'm sorry I don't spend my face buried in books every single bloody day of my life. " Ron shot back.

"Well, it would be nice if you actually DID study. How many O.W.L.s did you recieve? And how many did I recieve?" Hermione started.

"Listen you..."Ron began, glaring at Hermione in the face. Hermione glared right back, fists clenching.

"Earthquake!" Harry exclaimed, hoping to gather their attention. Luckily it worked. Both Ron and Hermione turned towards Harry.

"Say again, mate?" Ron asked.

"Earthquake! How brillant was THAT ride!?! When I saw the fire spouting out everywhere, I could've sworn that someone cast the spell Incendio!" Harry said. Luckily, Hermione and Ron started to chat about that ride as well, rarely getting along well.

"Right, and Twister! Twister was amazing. When I saw wind blowing everywhere, it reminded me exactly of the charm Aquilonis! Wicked, I tell you!" Ron smiled.

Right you are, Ron! That was exciting!" Hermione agreed. In the back of his mind, Harry smiled at the thought of his two best friends, who were only fighting a moment ago, were getting along great now.

"Hurry you three, the show's about to start!" Ginny said, waving for them to get closer. Harry, Ron, and Hermione jogged into a small arena and found the row of Weasley's all the way in the front. Running over, the each sat down and looked to the front where the floor stage was. In the middle was a medium sized, brown wooden square which greatly resembled a muggle dance floor. On either of the floor were two large square trampolines surrounded by blue padding. Behind the floor was another tampoline, only this kind was stretchy, skinny, and long, having a rectangular shape to it. The arena was white, and brightly lit, having white curtains as well to conceal the off stage portion of the place.

"What are we actually watching, Harry? " Ron asked.

"Well, I don't really know. I think it has something to do with muggles entertaining us in an unusual way. It's not like a theatrical play or anything. I think it has something to do with a type of dance called 'break dancing'...and another thing called 'raving' with sticks that glow. And a lot of gymnastics as well. You know, flips and junk. It's a group called the 'National French Dance Squad'. They're putting on a show for us." He said.

"Ohhh..." Ron nodded his head as the lights began to dim. All of a sudden, the arena was filled with darkness. Then, thunder began to fill the room and streaks of what looked like lightning tore across.

"YOU THINK YOU KNOW..." a deep voice boomed out at them. "...BUT YOU HAVE NO IDEA! HIT IT!"

All of a sudden, the lightning stopped and dim lights began to appear around the trampolines and dance floor. As an up-beat song began to play, people glowing in the dark started to stream into the arena. Some began to jump on the trampoline and perfrom all sorts of flips and back handsprings. Others started doing a choreagraphed dance on the square floor. In the blink of an eye, more started to do cartwheels and handsprings down the aisles as others began streaming out from backstage and onto the thin trampoline on glow-in-the dark mini pogo sticks, which were strapped to they're feet. As Harry could hear Ron mumble 'wicked' under his breath, he looked up to see people flipping above them, seeming to be connected to invisible bungee cords attached to the ceiling.

As a new hip-hop song began fading into the music, the up- beat song faded away. When this new song began, the people on trampolines and hanging from the ceiling took out orange, green, and blue colored glowing sticks attached to ropes that could not be seen. Many people on the dance floor took out the 'raving ropes' as well. Only one did not. This specific one began running backwards in a circle. All of a sudden, the person got down on the ground and started to perform moves that Harry believed were called 'break-dancing moves'. As all the performers in the arena began spinning the raving ropes together in a synchronized fashion, the solo person began to spin on their head.

"Blimey, will you look at that!" Harry heard Arthur say. The song started to sound a siren as the perfomers whipped they're ropes faster and faster and the solo dancer began spinning faster and faster. In a snap, the siren shut off and the lights sprung on. All the performers stopped they're ropes and posed around them as the one single dancer kept spinning. Harry could now see the dancer. The girl had glow-in-the dark sneakers, big baggy pants, and a tight tank-top. On her head was a glow-in-the-dark bandana which helped her spin on her head. Her black hair was dressed in pig tails as they spun around in a circle as well. Finally, the girl stopped and did a quick tumble, posing at the end as the last beat of the song was heard.

Astonished, Harry knew that he, as well as the rest of the group were staring at the young, Asian-looking girl who had just spun on her head in what seemed like forever. A man came from behind back stage with a microphone as Harry joined in with the rest of the crowd in giving applauses and clapping.

"And there you have it, ladies and gentlemen, the 'National French Dancing Squad!'" the man said, as whistles and screams burst thougout the arena. Harry watched as one of the performers standing next to the man walked over and took the microphone from him.

"If I could have your attention, please." A spiky haired, young man said in the microphone. "This performance you have all just seen happens to be the final performance of out little break-dancer...." Harry's eyes dropped from the man to the break-dancin girl and saw the performers around her give her little hugs.

"Jen is definitely one of the greatest people anyone could ever work with, and we sure will miss her. Starting in two weeks, she'll be going to school in England, and we'll be missing her dearly. These roses..." he said, as a person from backstage came out with a bouquet of roses, "are for her. She has blessed us dearly with her amazing skills and talents. We love you Jen, and we'll miss you."

At that note, everyone in the arena started to clap for her as she took a final bow.

"One thing is for sure...that girl is quite attractive." Fred said.

"Blimey, just attractive? She's gorgeous!" George concluded. Harry shot a look back at the girl who had tears starting to well in her eyes, yet a big smile on her face. He knew it as well: the girl is was sincerely beautiful. Her big brown eyes lit up her face, and her smile was amazing. He was still staring at her when he felt Ron push him a bit.

"Wow Harry, did you see that performance? It was brillant! Purely genius!" Ron exclaimed. But all Harry could do was nod, as his stare could not be taken from the young girl.

The performers started walking toward the audience as the girl placed the roses on the trampoline.

"The 'National French Dance Squad' will be answering any questions you have, signing autographs, and if you feel generous, will accept any tips you would like to give them! Thank you, and enjoy your time here at Universal Studios!"

Harry saw as the girl started to walk toward the audience, shaking hands with a couple of muggles and signing autographs. He didn't even notice that Fred and George were trying to plead and beg with they're father to stay away from the girl.

"I just want to ask her something!' Arthur insisted.

"No, dad! You're going to say something stupid! Something that reveal us!" Fred shook his head. However, Arthur tore from his sons' grasps and managed to catch the girl before she headed up the aisle. Soon enough, Fred and George started to follow, as well as Molly and Ginny. The trio soon found themselves face-to-face with that amazing, intriguing girl.

"You were simply amazing. Bravo, I must say girl! Brilliant you were!" Harry could hear Arthur telling the girl. Fred and George's faces began to redden as the girl started to say 'Thank You' over and over again.

"So that thing you did...the spinning on your head...was that hard?" Arthur asked.

"Well..." the girl began.

"Dad, please, leave the poor girl alone!" Ginny begged.

"No! Really, I love answering questions! Name's Jen. And to answer you're question, at first it was hard. But, as they always say, practice makes perfect. I started break-dancing when I was eight. I just turned 16 at the end of July, so you can imagine what eight years of practice could do!" she girl said nobly.

"Amazing!" was all Arthur could sayd. But before he could answer another question, Jen was tapped on the shoulder and asked to take a picture with a muggle family.

"Excuse me." Jen said, politely.

"Right then, nice talking to you." Arthur waved as the girl nodded to him. As she began to sign autographs, the Weasley family with Hermione and Harry started to head up the aisle toward exits.

"She seemed very nice." Ron said to Harry and Hermione. Harry nodded in agreement as they were a few feet away from getting out of the aisle.

Yet, before they could, Harry heard Jen yell, "Hey, wait! Potts, Grange, Weasel...hold on!"

Harry's heart stopped. "Did she just say...how does she know our names...wait....

At first, Harry thought he was dreaming, but looked to Ron and Hermione. They too had wide eyes and slowly began to turn around. In fact, everyone in the wizarding group did. But Harry's breathing started to quicken as he saw the pretty girl start to advance toward they're group.

Well, that's all I have for right now! Please, anyone with comments, crticisms (helpful at that), and ideas....please let me know! I hope you liked it! PLEASE REPLY!! I LIVE FOR THEM!

MaNdA_MaLfOy
September 29th, 2003, 2:29 am
Hey everyone...here's Chapter 2...please respond! Pleaseee!

Chapter 2

"Merlin's beard, she's heading right toward us!" Fred whispered to George.

"Mate, how do I look?" George asked his twin, brushing his shoulders off.

"Bloody hell, you BOTH look like morons. Now will you hush up?" Ron whispered violently, as the girl was no more than a couple of feet next to them. However, just as Hermione was going to reply a 'Yes?' to her calling, the girl walked right by the wizarding group and instead, walked up to three boys.

"You guys came! I can't believe it!" the girl cried out, giving hugs to them. "Weasle, what did you do to your hair? It's hot!"

A boy with brown hair and blond tips ran his fingers through it. "Oh, this? I decided to give it a little something. I started to get bored!" The four of them laughed. Harry and his group started to move back toward the door.

"That was close." Harry could hear Ron whisper to Hermione.

"I agree. It's not everyday you hear 'Potts, Grange, Weasle' in the same sentence and it NOT be us!" Hermione nodded.

Harry walked by the group of four with his head down. Before he fully passed the girl, he looked up. The girl's eyes moved from the boy she was talking with to Harry. And before he stepped out of the arena, Harry saw her wink at him. He smiled and left with his two friends, talking excitedly once again about the show they just witnessed.
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"Oh, and then, out of no where, you see it roaring and screaming again!" Ron yelled. The whole group was moving around the park again, trying to find a ride they haven't yet gone on. They had just exited the ride called, 'King Kong' and Ron, Hermione, and Harry began talking about it at once. Their tour of the muggle world was soon coming to a close, and they had only about a half an hour before they would depart.

"Daddy! I have to use the bathroom!" Ginny began to tug on her father's shirt.

"Very well then. Um..." Arthur started to look around. "There, straight ahead...go on!" He pointed.

"I'll come!" Hermione jogged after Ginny as they strode off to the bathroom together. Less and less people began to fill the park as the muggles were starting to go to their homes. As they neared the entrance of the bathroom, they could hear a voice yelling.

"Hey, is anyone in here? Can you help me?" the voice said.

Hermione and Ginny looked at each other and began to slow down their walk. Being very cautious, the two girls weren't sure whether or not muggles were supposed to be in need of help in a bathroom.

"I can't believe it. Of all the bathrooms where they are no people...it hasta be mine! Anyone there? The door is stuck!" the voice yelled as Hermione and Ginny could hear someone from the second stall try and push the swinging door.

Hermione and Ginny had finally entered the bathroom fully. Hermione turned to Ginny and put her finger to her lips, signaling to be quiet. They started to tip-toe their way toward the stall.

"Man-oh-man...if Dustin ever found out I did this...oh well." the voice said. All of a sudden, Hermione and Ginny heard a bookbag zipper open. Although they couldn't really see the item, the two girls saw a hand reach down to the bookbag that was on the floor inside the stall and pull out something.

"Alohomora!" the voice yelled, and the door swung open. "Hah, they you go!" the girl put back whatever it was she took out of her bookbag and, zippering it up, walked out of the stall. Hermione and Ginny looked with astonishment as they saw the break-dancing girl, Jen, walk out with the bookbag over her shoulder.

"Whoa! I didn't know there were people in here!" Jen said, jumping at the sight of them.

"Well....we just got in here." Hermione said back, defensively.

"And you didn't hear me yelling at the top of my lungs for help?" Jen asked them.

"No." Hermione said, matter-of-factly, with Ginny shaking her head.

"Well, whatever." The girl shrugged. She walked over to the sink and began washing her hands. After drying them, she turned toward the two girls, realizing that they had been watching her the whole time.

"What?" the girl's eyes narrowed down.

"What did you say to open that stall door?" Hermione asked.

"I...have no idea what you're talking about." the girl said.

"Oh, I think you do." Hermione said, walking to block the exit door. Jen's eyes glared at Hermione and she looked over her shoulder to see Ginny staring at her as well.

"Listen, back off." the girl said through gritted teeth. "I didn't say anything. All I did was kick the door, and I got out."

"Like hell you did!' Hermione yelled back. Ginny jumped at the outburst as the girl's eyes widened at the rude comment. "We saw you. You opened your bag and took something out. The next second, you say 'Alohomora', and the door just swings open!"

"Wait a second! You just said that you had just arrived when I left the stall! Now you're telling me that you saw everything that just happened. You little liar, you were spying on me! What, you think it's funny to see someone locked up in a stall, trying to get out?" The girl screamed back.

"No..." Hermione's voice lowered, realizing that she was wrong as well.

"Look, I don't have time for this. Get out of my way." Jen started to move by, but Hermione walked into her path again.

"Listen you! I don't dislike anyone, but you're coming soo close to being the first person I do." Jen said.

"Why did you say 'Alohomora' then?" Hermione asked. If you have nothing to hide, why won't you tell us?" Jen saw as Ginny came from behind and walk next to Hermione, her arms folded.

"Oh wow. Hiding something? You think I'm HIDING something? What IS there to hide? You want to know the truth? All right. Look. Let's say you want to open...a door. Okay, you want to open a door, but it's stuck. You're tugging and pulling, but the bloody thing won't budge. So you think you just need more power. What people usually do is, just when they're about to tug the hardest they've ever tugged, they say something, to give themselves 'power'. It's fake strength, really. So say I try and open the door, and say, "Come..." I tighten my grasp on the doorknob..."ON!" and then I pull. It opens, all thanks to a little fake power. So I say 'Alohomora'. And it seems that everytime I say that certain word, whatever I want to open, does. So THAT's what happened, if you MUST know. It's all fake power!" The girl explained.

Hermione's look of accusation started to soften a bit. She wanted to ask her if she was a witch. She really did. But what if she wasn't? She would be dangerously revealing their world. But what if she was? What was SHE doing performing with a muggle group? And the girl looked around their age as well...how come Hermione didn't see her at Hogwarts? A million questions ran through her head, but nothing she said.

"What did you pull out of your bookbag?" Ginny asked quietly. Hermione looked at Ginny. Good question!

"Oh, goodness! What IS this? 21 questions? You're like the police or something! It was my wallet, okay? I put BACK my wallet!" the girl yelled.

Ginny looked at Hermione, defeated. "Now, move! You girls are scaring me." Jen said. Ginny moved to the side, but Hermione's eyes were locked on Jen's. Then, she moved to the side. As Jen walked past Hermione, she accidently hit her shoulder against Hermione's, causing her bag to fall. As the bookbag hit the ground, something rolled out. Jen picked up her bag, and started to walk out of the bathroom.

"Wait a second...you dropped your..." Ginny looked down at what she was holding and gasped. "...wand!"

The girl spun around. Hermione grabbed the wand from Ginny and went to the girl. "And what is THIS?!"

The girl blushed and grabbed the wand from Hermione. "Well, Miss I-Must-Know-Everything, I happen to also be a magician here at Universal Studios, apart from break-dancing and being part of the dance team. It's good pay, all right?" And with that she walked away.

"A magician?" Hermione called after her.

"Yeah. And because of you two, I'm late for my last magical performance at 5:30. So if you'll excuse me, I REALLY hafta go." Jen said. And with that, she ran away.

Hermione and Ginny walked back to the wizarding group.

"There you two are! We thought you fell in or something!" Ron laughed.

"Well, Ron, unlike you, I would KNOW how a muggle toliet works. Falling in sounds like something YOU would do." Hermione shot back. Ron's ears glowed as Harry stifled a laugh.

"Daddy, can we go to the magic show?" Ginny asked. Arthur took out a pamphlet and looked at it back and forth. Then, he turned it upside down and still looked.

"I'm sorry, pumpkin. I'm afriad there is no magician show here." Arthur shrugged.

"What?" Hermione's heard shot toward Arthur. Hermione walked over to a worker who was selling ice cream. "Excuse me, sir. I was wondering if you could point me in the direction of where the magician show is located."

"Magician show? There ain't no magic show here at Universal Studios, hun." The man replied.

Hermione, raged inside, ran up to Ginny. "She lied! There IS no magic show here!" Ginny got up from sitting on the bench, and her and Hermione began running in the direction of where Jen last was seen.

"Now where the bloody hell are those two going?" Ron asked Harry. Soon, however, Ginny and Hermione stopped running, turned around, and walked back to the group, looking dismantled.

"Are you two all right?" Harry asked.

"Daddy, I wanna go home." Ginny said grumpily.

"Actually, it's about that time. All right everyone. I'm sure we all had a good time. I'm a bit tired myself. So how about we go back to Patrick's, and then go back home?" Arthur asked.

"I'm all for it." Fred got up.

"I second that!" George agreed. The group started to leave the park- camera, souvenirs, and all- and began to head toward the car.

"What happened back there?" Ron asked.

"I'll tell you two when we get back at your house, Ron." Hermione said. Fred, George, and Ginny hopped in the back seat of the muggle mini-van they rented and Ron, Hermione, and Harry sat in the middle seat. With Molly in the passenger seat and Arthur driving, they headed towards Patrick's, soon to leave the muggle world behind.

All right, that's all I have for now! Please, comment, ideas, criticisms...I need them! Thanks!

MaNdA_MaLfOy
October 7th, 2003, 2:03 pm
Here's the third chapter! I hope I get more replies than the last time :lol: please reply...PLEASEEE!

Chapter 3

"And then..." Hermione started, but there was a knock on the door. Molly Weasley popped her head in.

"Ronald, when your father gets back from the Ministry of Magic, we'll be eating dinner." She said, and closed the door behind her. It was around 7 in the evening, and they had all just finished travelling by Floo Powder from France back to their quiet house in England. Arthur went to the Ministry of Magic to pick up something, and the rest of them were waiting for him to come home, so they could have their dinner.

"Then what happened?" Ron asked eagerly.

"Then..." Hermione paused for dramatic effect as Ron and Harry leaned in. "She bumped into me, trying to exit the bathroom. Her bag falls to the floor and something rolls out. She didn't know it, so she picked up her bookbag and tried to leave. But Ginny picked up the item...and it was...a wand!"

"No way!" Ron exclaimed.

"Yes way! And you want to know what her REASON was for having the wand? She was a magician at Universal Studios!" Hermione concluded.

"Bloody hell, smart girl she is...making that rubbish up on the spot. She's pure talent, I tell you!" Ron said.

"Smart? You mean she's a compulsive liar!" Hermione shot back.

"Did you think that MAYBE, just MAYBE, you AREN'T the smartest witch there is?" Ron defended himself.

"Oh, you little..." Hermione glared.

"So THAT'S why you asked the worker where the magic show was? To see if she was lying?" Harry asked, changing the subject.

"Yes..." Hermione said, he eyes fixedly on Ron's. All of a sudden, a loud crack was heard and Fred was found himself standing in between Ron and Hermione.

"Whoa there! Mum wanted to let you know that dinner's ready. Dad just pulled up." Fred said. And with another loud crack, he apparated downstairs.

"Fred Weasley! Get off your sister! Of all the places to apparate! Can't you just use the stairs, you bafoon?!?" the three upstairs heard Molly scream.

"I don't know about you, but I'm bloody hungry." Harry said, and he got up and walked toward the door. Hermione and Ron stopped glaring at each other, and walked to the door as well. Then, the three went downstairs.
***

"Yeah! And then you feel water sprayed at you, acting like the alien's spit! That was brilliant!" Ron added his comment on the 'Alien: Resurrection' ride at Universal Studios. Fred, George, Ginny, Ron, Hermione, and Harry were all sitting at the table, discussing the many rides at the amusement park as Molly kept piling plate after plate of food on the table.

"Hello, everyone!" Arthur Weasley said, walking through the front door. Greetings of 'Hi, dad' and 'Hello, Mr. Weasley' filled the room.

"Finally, we can eat." Fred said, reaching for a leg of the chicken.

"Wait, no! I have a surprise! I brought someone here!" Arthur said. All eyes turned to him as he walked over to the door and opened it fully. Then leaning a little outside, the group could hear him say, "Go on now, come on in!"

From the right side of the door, popped in the doorway, a hooded figure. The person was wearing baggy, gray sweatpants and a large, navy-blue hooded sweatshirt with the hood covering their face. The figure was looking on the ground, and Harry could see black stands of hair appearing from the hood.

"Go on now, girl. Show your face." Arthur Weasley urged. The person started to slowly pick up her head, and she took off her hood.

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