*Jess*
October 5th, 2003, 5:44 am
Ok...well, um...here's my fanfic..please click HERE (http://www.cosforums.com/showthread.php?t=19002) to post some Feedback on this! (Please do..I need all the feedback I can get!!) So, yeah..Enjoy the story! I'll be posting a continuation soon!! ;)
The Sirius Black Story
Sirius Black glanced down at his watch for the fifth time in as many minutes. ‘Come on,’ he murmured, urging his flying motorcycle to move faster. ‘I’m going to be late!’ It was nearly nine o’clock, and he needed to be at Peter’s. He leant into the handlebars, spurring the bicycle on. The cool breeze whipped through his wild, dark hair, and bursts of cloud streaked past him, disappearing into the velvety night sky.
A few moments later, Sirius began his descent. The sudden downward motion made the wind blow directly into his face, forcing him to squint his eyes in order to see the ground, which was getting closer by the second. He wrapped his fingers around the brake on the handlebar and squeezed, causing the bike to slow as he hit the hard earth with a thud. Sirius lurched to a stop, kicked down the stand and jumped off the motorcycle.
Before him stood a run down old house, which gave the impression that it was going to give way at any moment. The decrepit dwelling looked as though it had been vacant for many years: the garden was an overgrown disaster; paint was peeling from the old weatherboard exterior, the front windows had large cracks through them and were covered in cobwebs and the picket fence had collapsed into the dying remains of an old pear tree growing in the flowerbed behind it. But Sirius knew better than to think the building was not in use- this was Peter Pettigrew’s hiding place.
Sirius walked quickly through a gap in the fence where he supposed a gate had once been located, and hurried up the unkempt garden path. He stepped up to the front door and took a quick look around him, but the only sound was that of the cool night air rustling the leaves of the ancient pear tree. No one was there- good. Sirius reached out his hand, curled it into a fist and rapped three times on the door. He could hear his knocks echoing through the house. He frowned slightly. ‘Perhaps he’s in the back room,’ he thought to himself. He knocked again, but still nothing happened. Sirius glanced around the garden again, and then slowly turned back towards the entrance. ‘Peter?’ he called quietly, uncertainty rippling through his voice. ‘Peter?’ he repeated, more loudly this time. No answer.
Sirius plunged one hand into his robes, his fingers closing around his wand, while he stretched out the other hand and grasped the doorknob. He expected the door to be locked, and was about to perform the Alohomora charm when a particularly strong gust of wind sprang up, blowing into Sirius, who stumbled forward into the door. It creaked open, and Sirius held his breath. Why wasn’t it locked?
He stepped over the threshold into the deserted hallway. Sirius stared around, looking for something, anything-some sign of life. The dusty floorboards creaked under his weight as he moved swiftly down the corridor, searching for his friend.
‘Peter!’ he called boldly, staring into the darkness. ‘PETER!’
He realised he had come to the end of the house. There was nowhere else to look. Peter was gone, and there was no sign of a struggle. Something wasn’t right.
Sirius was staring around, running his fingers through his hair in angst when his heart gave a sudden jolt. ‘No,’ he muttered. ‘Not Peter, he couldn’t have…’ then it dawned on him. ‘Lily and James,’ he whispered.
Sirius turned on his heel and ran for the door. He bolted down the garden path, jumped onto his motorcycle and revved the engine. ‘Come on- COME ON!’ the engine roared to life and Sirius kicked off the ground, soaring into the starry sky. ‘It’s not true,’ he told himself over and over. ‘They’re fine, Peter must have changed his hiding place…it’s not true…’
Sirius’s heart raced as he began his descent into Godric’s Hollow. As he neared the ground a large cloud of fog obscured his vision. ‘Fog?’ Sirius thought, puzzled. ‘Fog- in the middle of summer?’ But then, as he took a deep breath, he realised- it wasn’t fog…it was smoke.
Sirius landed outside the Potter’s house…or at least what was left of it. He jumped off the bike and ran towards the ruins. ‘JAMES!’ he cried. ‘LILY!’
He stumbled in his haste and fell forwards, hitting the ground hard. He sat up and stared into the smouldering remnants, white and shaking. A single tear rolled down his cheek and dropped silently onto his robes.
‘Sirius?’ a voice behind him said quietly. Sirius tore his eyes away from the wreckage- he knew that voice.
H-Hagrid,’ he whispered unsteadily. ‘H-Hagrid, I-’
‘No need ter say anythin’…I know…’ Hagrid, looking pale and shaken, pulled him up off the ground and into a quick, one-armed hug. Sirius pulled away and took a deep breath, trying to steady himself.
‘When…when did it…?’
‘Abou’ ten minutes ago…don’ know how he did it…what with the Fidelius Charm an’ all…’ Hagrid trailed off. Sirius looked at the ground but didn’t say anything. He knew how Voldemort had done it…he knew how he had overcome the Fidelius Charm…it all boiled down to a man named Peter Pettigrew.
‘But…but the house, Hagrid. What happened to the house?’
‘Well, I dun’ know…but- but he’s gone…he’s finally gone…’ Sirius looked at Hagrid, bewildered. Who had finally gone?
‘Who, Hagrid? Who’s gone?’
‘Blimey, yeh haven’t heard? He Who Must Not Be Named, Sirius!’
Sirius gaped at him in shock. ‘Gone? But…but how?’
‘I dun’ know…but he is. Anyway, I’ve got ter be goin’, got to take him to Surrey…’
‘W-what’s that, Hagrid? Take who?’
‘Harry, Sirius,’ Hagrid said gently. ‘I’ve got ter take Harry.’
Sirius’s breath caught in his throat. He hadn’t even thought of his godson. ‘No…no, not Harry too…’
‘Harry’s fine,’ Hagrid said. ‘See fer yerself.’ He lowered his arm and, with his free hand, pulled back the cloth. Sirius sighed with relief. Inside was his godson, fast asleep and clearly alive. Then Sirius’s eyes travelled up to Harry’s forehead, and he saw a great cut across it, in the shape of a lightning bolt. He stared at it. Where had it come from? But he didn’t have a chance to ask- Hagrid was already bundling Harry up again, and was turning to leave.
‘Hagrid,’ he said suddenly. ‘Give Harry to me, Hagrid, I’m his godfather, I’ll look after him-’
‘Oh, Sirius, I’m sorry, but I can’t.’ Hagrid said, shifting his feet uncomfortably.
‘What do you mean you can’t? I’m his godfather- James and Lily named me guardian, he’s my responsibility-’
‘I’m sorry, Sirius, but Dumbledore’s orders are ter take the boy ter his aunt and uncle’s house in Surrey.’ Hagrid told him.
‘To the Muggles? Not Lily’s sister- I…I know about her and her husband, they won’t treat him properly…they-they don’t understand us…please Hagrid, Harry should be with me, he belongs with me now, you can’t take him…’
‘Look, Sirius, I’ve got ter take him, I’m here on Dumbledore’s orders, and tha’s tha’.’ Hagrid told him, firmly.
Sirius sighed, defeated. Then he thought of something. ‘Hagrid,’ he said quietly. ‘Hagrid, take my bike. It-it’ll be faster…take Harry to his- his aunt and uncle’s on it. I…I won’t be needing it anymore.’
Hagrid looked at him for a moment, and then nodded. He swung himself onto the motorcycle and looked back at Sirius. ‘Take care,’ he said. Sirius nodded.
‘Goodbye, Harry,’ Sirius said softly. ‘I’ll see you again soon.’
Hagrid gave him a grave smile. ‘See yeh,’ he said grimly, and he flew away into the night. Sirius watched them disappear, and then turned back towards the remains of his best friend’s house. Muggles were starting to gather around the ruins, and Sirius knew that he needed to go.
‘I’m going to find him, James,’ he said quietly. ‘I’ll find Peter.’ And with a swish of his cloak, he Disapparated.
Sirius woke early the next day, having slept the night outside the Leaky Cauldron in Diagon Alley. He would have rented a room, but he knew what was going to happen: Dumbledore had thought that he, Sirius, had been Lily and James’s Secret Keeper. The Ministry of Magic would have been told by now…they would be looking for him. But Sirius was not deterred- he had a good idea as to where Peter would be.
Sirius slipped out of Diagon Alley before the stores opened and moved quickly down the streets of London, searching. It wasn’t until mid-morning that he found Peter, who was skulking along, a block away from St. Mungo’s. Peter didn’t notice Sirius until he was right upon him.
‘Hello, Peter,’ Sirius spat. Pettigrew whirled around in shock.
‘S-Sirius-’ he stuttered, ‘w-what are you doing here?’
‘Don’t play dumb, Peter, you stinking piece of filth,’ Sirius said softly, his rage rising. ‘I know what you did…you killed Lily and James…and now I’m going to kill you.’
‘D-don’t know what you m-mean, Sirius,’ Pettigrew said, looking panicky.
‘Don’t lie to me, Peter! I know you were their Secret Keeper!’ Sirius snarled.
Peter looked terrified- but then he gave a small smile. He opened his mouth to speak, and his face contorted, looking desperate. ‘Lily and James, Sirius! How could you!’ Sirius stared at him in disbelief. What was he doing?
Muggles were turning to look at them after hearing Peter’s cry. Pettigrew pulled out his wand, and Sirius did the same.
‘You’re not going to try to kill me, are you, Peter?’ Sirius muttered angrily. ‘You never were good with your wand…’
Muggles had stopped walking now and were gazing at the two wizards with their mouths open; apparently mesmerised by the scene taking place before their eyes. But Sirius didn’t care- Muggles or no Muggles; he was going to avenge Lily and James. Pettigrew looked at him, gave another tiny smile, and waved his wand. Sirius gasped and threw his hands over his face. There was a flash of green light, a huge explosion, and the street disappeared into an enormous crater, which was so deep that it had cracked open the sewer beneath. Sirius looked up; Peter was gone.
Sirius stared into the remnants of the road. Muggles lay everywhere, either dead or bleeding profusely, others looking on in shock, screaming. Sirius looked to where Peter had been. There was nothing but a bloodstained pile of robes lying on the pavement…
It took a moment for Sirius to comprehend what had just happened. Then he realised: Peter had tried to kill him…and had blown himself up in the process. Sirius began to laugh. It was too amazing to be true. He clutched his sides, doubled up in the hilarity of it all for what seemed like an eternity. He didn’t even notice when the wizards from the Department of Magical Catastrophes and the Magical Law Enforcement Squad arrived. In fact, he only realised they were there when he was being bound by magical rope and escorted from the scene.
‘W-wait!’ he said suddenly. ‘What are you doing? I haven’t done anything! You don’t understand…you can’t take me! Please…!’
:D By Jess 2003 :D
The Sirius Black Story
Sirius Black glanced down at his watch for the fifth time in as many minutes. ‘Come on,’ he murmured, urging his flying motorcycle to move faster. ‘I’m going to be late!’ It was nearly nine o’clock, and he needed to be at Peter’s. He leant into the handlebars, spurring the bicycle on. The cool breeze whipped through his wild, dark hair, and bursts of cloud streaked past him, disappearing into the velvety night sky.
A few moments later, Sirius began his descent. The sudden downward motion made the wind blow directly into his face, forcing him to squint his eyes in order to see the ground, which was getting closer by the second. He wrapped his fingers around the brake on the handlebar and squeezed, causing the bike to slow as he hit the hard earth with a thud. Sirius lurched to a stop, kicked down the stand and jumped off the motorcycle.
Before him stood a run down old house, which gave the impression that it was going to give way at any moment. The decrepit dwelling looked as though it had been vacant for many years: the garden was an overgrown disaster; paint was peeling from the old weatherboard exterior, the front windows had large cracks through them and were covered in cobwebs and the picket fence had collapsed into the dying remains of an old pear tree growing in the flowerbed behind it. But Sirius knew better than to think the building was not in use- this was Peter Pettigrew’s hiding place.
Sirius walked quickly through a gap in the fence where he supposed a gate had once been located, and hurried up the unkempt garden path. He stepped up to the front door and took a quick look around him, but the only sound was that of the cool night air rustling the leaves of the ancient pear tree. No one was there- good. Sirius reached out his hand, curled it into a fist and rapped three times on the door. He could hear his knocks echoing through the house. He frowned slightly. ‘Perhaps he’s in the back room,’ he thought to himself. He knocked again, but still nothing happened. Sirius glanced around the garden again, and then slowly turned back towards the entrance. ‘Peter?’ he called quietly, uncertainty rippling through his voice. ‘Peter?’ he repeated, more loudly this time. No answer.
Sirius plunged one hand into his robes, his fingers closing around his wand, while he stretched out the other hand and grasped the doorknob. He expected the door to be locked, and was about to perform the Alohomora charm when a particularly strong gust of wind sprang up, blowing into Sirius, who stumbled forward into the door. It creaked open, and Sirius held his breath. Why wasn’t it locked?
He stepped over the threshold into the deserted hallway. Sirius stared around, looking for something, anything-some sign of life. The dusty floorboards creaked under his weight as he moved swiftly down the corridor, searching for his friend.
‘Peter!’ he called boldly, staring into the darkness. ‘PETER!’
He realised he had come to the end of the house. There was nowhere else to look. Peter was gone, and there was no sign of a struggle. Something wasn’t right.
Sirius was staring around, running his fingers through his hair in angst when his heart gave a sudden jolt. ‘No,’ he muttered. ‘Not Peter, he couldn’t have…’ then it dawned on him. ‘Lily and James,’ he whispered.
Sirius turned on his heel and ran for the door. He bolted down the garden path, jumped onto his motorcycle and revved the engine. ‘Come on- COME ON!’ the engine roared to life and Sirius kicked off the ground, soaring into the starry sky. ‘It’s not true,’ he told himself over and over. ‘They’re fine, Peter must have changed his hiding place…it’s not true…’
Sirius’s heart raced as he began his descent into Godric’s Hollow. As he neared the ground a large cloud of fog obscured his vision. ‘Fog?’ Sirius thought, puzzled. ‘Fog- in the middle of summer?’ But then, as he took a deep breath, he realised- it wasn’t fog…it was smoke.
Sirius landed outside the Potter’s house…or at least what was left of it. He jumped off the bike and ran towards the ruins. ‘JAMES!’ he cried. ‘LILY!’
He stumbled in his haste and fell forwards, hitting the ground hard. He sat up and stared into the smouldering remnants, white and shaking. A single tear rolled down his cheek and dropped silently onto his robes.
‘Sirius?’ a voice behind him said quietly. Sirius tore his eyes away from the wreckage- he knew that voice.
H-Hagrid,’ he whispered unsteadily. ‘H-Hagrid, I-’
‘No need ter say anythin’…I know…’ Hagrid, looking pale and shaken, pulled him up off the ground and into a quick, one-armed hug. Sirius pulled away and took a deep breath, trying to steady himself.
‘When…when did it…?’
‘Abou’ ten minutes ago…don’ know how he did it…what with the Fidelius Charm an’ all…’ Hagrid trailed off. Sirius looked at the ground but didn’t say anything. He knew how Voldemort had done it…he knew how he had overcome the Fidelius Charm…it all boiled down to a man named Peter Pettigrew.
‘But…but the house, Hagrid. What happened to the house?’
‘Well, I dun’ know…but- but he’s gone…he’s finally gone…’ Sirius looked at Hagrid, bewildered. Who had finally gone?
‘Who, Hagrid? Who’s gone?’
‘Blimey, yeh haven’t heard? He Who Must Not Be Named, Sirius!’
Sirius gaped at him in shock. ‘Gone? But…but how?’
‘I dun’ know…but he is. Anyway, I’ve got ter be goin’, got to take him to Surrey…’
‘W-what’s that, Hagrid? Take who?’
‘Harry, Sirius,’ Hagrid said gently. ‘I’ve got ter take Harry.’
Sirius’s breath caught in his throat. He hadn’t even thought of his godson. ‘No…no, not Harry too…’
‘Harry’s fine,’ Hagrid said. ‘See fer yerself.’ He lowered his arm and, with his free hand, pulled back the cloth. Sirius sighed with relief. Inside was his godson, fast asleep and clearly alive. Then Sirius’s eyes travelled up to Harry’s forehead, and he saw a great cut across it, in the shape of a lightning bolt. He stared at it. Where had it come from? But he didn’t have a chance to ask- Hagrid was already bundling Harry up again, and was turning to leave.
‘Hagrid,’ he said suddenly. ‘Give Harry to me, Hagrid, I’m his godfather, I’ll look after him-’
‘Oh, Sirius, I’m sorry, but I can’t.’ Hagrid said, shifting his feet uncomfortably.
‘What do you mean you can’t? I’m his godfather- James and Lily named me guardian, he’s my responsibility-’
‘I’m sorry, Sirius, but Dumbledore’s orders are ter take the boy ter his aunt and uncle’s house in Surrey.’ Hagrid told him.
‘To the Muggles? Not Lily’s sister- I…I know about her and her husband, they won’t treat him properly…they-they don’t understand us…please Hagrid, Harry should be with me, he belongs with me now, you can’t take him…’
‘Look, Sirius, I’ve got ter take him, I’m here on Dumbledore’s orders, and tha’s tha’.’ Hagrid told him, firmly.
Sirius sighed, defeated. Then he thought of something. ‘Hagrid,’ he said quietly. ‘Hagrid, take my bike. It-it’ll be faster…take Harry to his- his aunt and uncle’s on it. I…I won’t be needing it anymore.’
Hagrid looked at him for a moment, and then nodded. He swung himself onto the motorcycle and looked back at Sirius. ‘Take care,’ he said. Sirius nodded.
‘Goodbye, Harry,’ Sirius said softly. ‘I’ll see you again soon.’
Hagrid gave him a grave smile. ‘See yeh,’ he said grimly, and he flew away into the night. Sirius watched them disappear, and then turned back towards the remains of his best friend’s house. Muggles were starting to gather around the ruins, and Sirius knew that he needed to go.
‘I’m going to find him, James,’ he said quietly. ‘I’ll find Peter.’ And with a swish of his cloak, he Disapparated.
Sirius woke early the next day, having slept the night outside the Leaky Cauldron in Diagon Alley. He would have rented a room, but he knew what was going to happen: Dumbledore had thought that he, Sirius, had been Lily and James’s Secret Keeper. The Ministry of Magic would have been told by now…they would be looking for him. But Sirius was not deterred- he had a good idea as to where Peter would be.
Sirius slipped out of Diagon Alley before the stores opened and moved quickly down the streets of London, searching. It wasn’t until mid-morning that he found Peter, who was skulking along, a block away from St. Mungo’s. Peter didn’t notice Sirius until he was right upon him.
‘Hello, Peter,’ Sirius spat. Pettigrew whirled around in shock.
‘S-Sirius-’ he stuttered, ‘w-what are you doing here?’
‘Don’t play dumb, Peter, you stinking piece of filth,’ Sirius said softly, his rage rising. ‘I know what you did…you killed Lily and James…and now I’m going to kill you.’
‘D-don’t know what you m-mean, Sirius,’ Pettigrew said, looking panicky.
‘Don’t lie to me, Peter! I know you were their Secret Keeper!’ Sirius snarled.
Peter looked terrified- but then he gave a small smile. He opened his mouth to speak, and his face contorted, looking desperate. ‘Lily and James, Sirius! How could you!’ Sirius stared at him in disbelief. What was he doing?
Muggles were turning to look at them after hearing Peter’s cry. Pettigrew pulled out his wand, and Sirius did the same.
‘You’re not going to try to kill me, are you, Peter?’ Sirius muttered angrily. ‘You never were good with your wand…’
Muggles had stopped walking now and were gazing at the two wizards with their mouths open; apparently mesmerised by the scene taking place before their eyes. But Sirius didn’t care- Muggles or no Muggles; he was going to avenge Lily and James. Pettigrew looked at him, gave another tiny smile, and waved his wand. Sirius gasped and threw his hands over his face. There was a flash of green light, a huge explosion, and the street disappeared into an enormous crater, which was so deep that it had cracked open the sewer beneath. Sirius looked up; Peter was gone.
Sirius stared into the remnants of the road. Muggles lay everywhere, either dead or bleeding profusely, others looking on in shock, screaming. Sirius looked to where Peter had been. There was nothing but a bloodstained pile of robes lying on the pavement…
It took a moment for Sirius to comprehend what had just happened. Then he realised: Peter had tried to kill him…and had blown himself up in the process. Sirius began to laugh. It was too amazing to be true. He clutched his sides, doubled up in the hilarity of it all for what seemed like an eternity. He didn’t even notice when the wizards from the Department of Magical Catastrophes and the Magical Law Enforcement Squad arrived. In fact, he only realised they were there when he was being bound by magical rope and escorted from the scene.
‘W-wait!’ he said suddenly. ‘What are you doing? I haven’t done anything! You don’t understand…you can’t take me! Please…!’
:D By Jess 2003 :D