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December 19th, 2003, 10:20 pm
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Voldemort had returned and defeated Dumbledore. He is about to build an army that is going to destroy everything and kill all muggles. The Order of the Phoenix, now led by Harry Potter who is 24 years old, is trying to stop him. In order to do that they decide to send a spy to Voldemort…
“The moon is so beautiful.” said Jessica Lewis and looked up to the sky.
“Yes it is beautiful.” Harry Potter looked also up to the sky and then at Jessica’s face. “But not as beautiful as you are.”
Jessica laughed and looked into his eyes. “I love you.”
“I love you, too.” Harry gave an impassionad kiss. They were sitting outside of the headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix. Jessica was a petite girl with long black hair and a pretty face.
Harry sighted. “I don’t know what to say to you. There was so much I wanted to let you know but now you are here and I forget everything.”
Jessica put her forefinger on his mouth. “Don’t say anything.”
“But I have to.” said Harry. “I have to tell you: Please don’t do this, Jess. It is too dangerous. I don’t want you to lose you. ”
Jessica smiled at him confidently. “I can do this. I am going to come back and everything will be alright. Just trust me, Harry.”
Harry shook his head. “It’s not that I don’t trust you. But you are the most precious thing I’ve ever had and I can’t live without you. I don’t want to be separated from you.”
Jessica was stirred. Her eyes were filled with tears. “You are making it so much harder for me, Harry. I’ve made my decision and no one is going to change it no matter what. Voldemort is out there and we don’t know how to stop him. I need to go and at least find out something.” said Jessica. She saw that Harry was trying find a response so she placed her head on his shoulder before he could frame an answer.
“It is time.” said somebody coyly. Jessica and Harry turned around at the same time. It was Ginny Weasley. She had a very unpleasant look on her face.
“Okay Ginny. We are coming.” said Jessica with a smile. She was always smiling and nice to the people around her. She looked in Harry’s broken-hearted eyes and took his Hand. Then they went into the house.
December 20th, 2003, 4:36 am
When they entered they saw that everyone was standing around, waiting for them. And all the people they passed came tapped on Jessica’s shoulder.
“Good luck, beautiful.” said Oliver Wood when they passed him.
“This can’t be much harder than a Quidditch-game.” replied Jessica and gave him a hug.
“Take good care of you.” he whispered.
When they moved to the end of the room they found Tonks, Hermione and Lupin at a trap door. She gave each of them a hug. When she gave Hermione the hug she started to cry. “G… good luck, Jess.” said her sobbing. “Yeah, keep your chin up.” said Lupin and Tonks nodded.
“Okay here is the deal.” Lupin started to explain. “We are going to lock this door. It is impossible for you to open it so when Voldemort’s people come they are going to think you are a prisoner. When you hear some one just start to scream “help” as loud as you can, okay? In 24 hours I am going to come back and check if you are still here. You got it?"
Jessica nodded her head. “Take good care of you.” Lupin hugged her again.
She turned around and went to Harry. “I love you.” aspirated her in his ears. “I love you, too.” said Harry and gave her a kiss.
“Are you ready?” asked Hermione who still had tears in her eyes.
“Yes. I am ready.” answered Jessica. Hermione muttered a spell and immediately her pretty face deformed into a face of a prisoner who was tortured, with knobs and rifts were everywhere.
“Get your wands.” said Lupin to Hermione, Tonks and Hermione. “Now remember. Whatever you don’t, focus on what you are doing. Bellatrix Lestrange is very strong. Jess, you better hide where she can’t see you. If she sees you and she escapes to her master, you will get in trouble.”
Jessica nodded and went in the room behind the trap door.
“Okay I’ll count till 3. 1…2…3” heard Jessica Lupin saying. He yelled a spell and the trap door opened with a ear-battering noise.
December 20th, 2003, 2:51 pm
“Come out, Bellatrix.” said Lupin.
“Why?” heard Jessica a deep woman voice saying.
“We are moving because somebody gave your master a hint were we could be.” This time it was Tonks speaking. Jessica heard slow steps and the floor was creaking. She had seen Bellatrix before. A strong woman with a shape of a man and eyes that were always full of hate.
“That was a huge mistake, letting me out.” said Bellatrix cattily.
“Well…” said Lupin and Jessica was impressed by the calmness in his voice. “We couldn’t just let you rot…”
Suddenly she could hear Bellatrix screaming : "ACCIO WAND." followed by quick moves, a girl screaming and glass was breaking. People were yelling spells.
But after a while it was quiet again. “Please. Don’t let anything bad had happened.” said Jessica and a tear ran across her face.
“Come out, Jess.” said Lupin.
She came out of her room and saw Bellatrix - with a wand in her hand - and Harry lying on the floor. “Oh my god, Harry.” said her and ran to him.
“He is alright. He is just going to be knocked out for a couple hours.” said Hermione and gave Neville Longbottom who was standing behind her an angry look.
“Now it’s time for you. Hurry up. They will be here at any minute” said Tonks.
Jessica kissed Harry on the forehead. Then she walked into the trap door.
“Bye Jessica.” said Lupin and looked at her one last time. Then he muttered a spell and the trap door closed.
“Bye,” whispered Jessica in the dark.
December 20th, 2003, 11:25 pm
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She heard everyone leaving and looked around. It was dirty and it cold there. She didn’t have anything to warm her up or at least light up the room. Only a tiny little window was on the back of the room and the moon was shining through it.
Now she was all alone. She sat down next to the tiny window and looked up to the moon. She grabbed her pendant on her necklace. It was silver and in a shape of a heart. In the middle of the heart was a rose. It was a heritage from her mother who died when she was very young. Her mother and Jessica’s second name is Rose. She never knew why she died. It was very precious possession to her because her father gave it to her. Her father, who also was a spy and died in his mission 2 years ago, Voldemort found out that he was a spy and killed him. A mix of sadness and anger was in her heart. She was willing to give her life to defeat Voldemort.
It was hard for her to convince the others but she was indeed the best to be a spy. She learnt a lot from her father and she was the only Slytherin in the order. Both of her parents were in Gryffindor. But she was a Slytherin.
She put her hand in the trouser pocket and felt her mirror. With those mirror she could reach Harry at any time. Harry had the other part of it. He got it from her godfather Sirius Black who died 9 years ago. Hermione jinxed it so to everyone else it was a normal mirror and only she could use it to talk to Harry. But Lupin warned them to only use it when they really need it because she might get caught.
She sighted and asked herself how it is going be if she is a Death Eater. Lupin told her how to block her mind so Voldemort couldn’t read it. But she knew that this isn’t enough. She had to act like she is evil. To make Voldemort trust her she has to be tough and don’t care about others. What is she going to do when Voldemort asks her to kill someone? She could never kill someone.
December 21st, 2003, 2:42 pm
Bang – Jessica heard something falling on the floor. She went to the door and listened carefully. She heard steps.
“You idiot.” Someone was whispering.
“There is no one here.” whispered another person and spoke up. “There is no on in here. They already left.”
“Oh man, the Dark Lord is really going to be angry. We blew it.” said a woman’s voice.
Jessica laughed. She knew exactly what happened. They received an owl with a letter from Lupin to Tonks that included the fact that the Order of the Phoenix was here. They thought that the owl got lost and came here to blow the order up.
“Let’s just go.” said a man.
“Wait!” yelled Jessica to the door. “Is there someone? I am here! Help me!” She couldn’t believe that they didn’t even look in the trap door.
“It is coming from there.” said a deep voice and the steps came closer. “There is a trap door. Who is there?” asked a woman.
“I am Jessica Lewis. These *******s of the Order of the Phoenix locked me in here.” She heard the people discussing outside.
“Okay, Jessica. We are going to free you in a bit. Stay away from the door.”
Jessica moved away and she heard some one yelling a spell. Bang – the trap door blew up.
“Lumos.” said a guy and looked at Jessica.
“You look horrible.” he said. “What did they do to you?”
Jessica laughed. “Are you serving the dark Lord?” The guy nodded. “Bring me to him.” said Jessica almost bidding.
“Why would I do that?” asked the guy displeased by Jessica’s tone.
“Because I know something you don’t know. Now take me to him.” Jessica answered.
“Just tell me. I will tell him what you found out.” said the guy.
Jessica laughed. “So you can tell him that you found it out, what? No way! I will tell him.” She crossed her arms and waited for an answer.
“Lady, we can just leave you here and let you rot.” said the guy again and turned around to leave.
“Oh really?” asked Jessica unimpressed. “Then good luck with the dark lord. Do you really think he is going to be satisfied with your work when you go back with no information at all?”
He stopped and thought for a moment. “Okay I’ll bring you to the Dark Lord.” he said.
“My name is Jason Anderson. I am leading this whole operation. What did you say was your name?”
“Jessica Lewis.” She shook his hand. “Okay tough lady.” Jason made her a sign to follow him. “Come with me.”
December 22nd, 2003, 1:28 pm
“We are almost there.” said Jason.
Jessica was right behind him on his broomstick. She was blindfolded so she couldn’t see where they where going but she knew from the voices that were talking that there were at least 6 people traveling with them. Then she felt that they were going lower and lower and suddenly she felt the ground under her feet.
“Here we are.” said Jason and removed the cloth from her eyes. “This is the headquarters of Voldemort’s army.”
The sun was shining bright and Jessica’s eyes didn’t experience such brightness for hours. She put her hands in front of her eyes and blinked. After her eyes got used to the sun again she looked at Voldemort’s magnificent castle. She was staring at it and couldn’t believe it.
Then she turned around to Jason and shouted at him: “Why did you idiots cover my eyes? Did you really think that I wouldn’t recognize Hogwarts? Who doesn’t know Hogwarts? Every freaking wizard and witch from England went to this school. You are a bunch of dumb nuts.”
The little group of people looked at each other without knowing what to say and just stared at her.
“What are you staring at?” said Jessica annoyed. “Take me to Lord Voldemort! Is that so hard?”
The guy behind Jason scratched the top of his head. “It's there.” he said and pointed with his finger to the castle.
“I know it's in the castle. Are you really that retarded?” shouted Jessica’s and her brain was racing. Moments like these made become clear why she was in Slytherin. She had a good heart but sometimes her temper won't let her to stay calm. “Follow me.” said Jason and went towards the castle.
December 25th, 2003, 1:45 am
“Let me in.” said Jason to the two guards in front of the main entrance of Hogwarts.
“Why?” asked the two guards.
“The Dark Lord sent me on a mission to the headquarters of the order of the phoenix. And we found her.” said Jason. “She has something to tell. It is very important.”
One of the guards looked at Jessica. “What do you want to tell? We are going to tell him. Lord Voldemort doesn’t receive ugly faces like you.”
Jessica gasped for breath. She was never offended like that in her entire life. She was feeling that people were treating her different since her face was deformed. “Then why did he make a butthead like you a guard?” asked her.
The guard looked like he is going to beat her.
“What is going on in here?” asked someone behind them. A young man came out of the entrance hall. The guard bent his head down.
“Mr. Mcnair…” “This butt head won’t let me go to Lord Voldemort although I have very important information for him.” adjourned Jessica.
“Who are you?” asked Mcnair. “Jessica Lewis, I was prisoner from the order of the phoenix. This guy here (she pointed at Jason) freed me but my impression till now is that only retards work for the Dark Lord. Take me to him and he has someone who is loyal, hard-workig and smart.”
Mcnair laughed. “I like your attitude. Come on, let’s go.” He said and entered the entrance hall. Jessica gave the guard a bittersweet and followed him. Jason made a step forward to go with them Mcnair turned around and said: “Not you.”
December 26th, 2003, 11:25 pm
“So you are a Death Eater?” asked Jessica when they went through the halls. Macnair nodded.
“Have you always been a Death Eater?” Macnair nodded again. “Are you going to serve the Dark Lord until your death?” asked Jessica again. Macnair nodded once again.
“Just shut up.” yelled Macnair. “You are really going on my nerves. I am going to bring you to the Dark Lord, okay? Until we are there you are not going to say a word.” He turned around and walked again. Jessica, who was shocked, followed him without saying anything.
Hogwarts was the same as in her memories, mysterious and old. But most of the pictures weren’t on the wall anymore. The place was quiet and peaceful. The only thing they heard when they were walking were their own steps.
After a while he stopped. “In here?” asked Jessica and looked at the door. She recognized it; it was the dormitory of the hospital wing.
“Err… so the Dark Lord chose to use the hospital wing.” She cleared her throat. “That is indeed very smart. No one would look for him in the hospital wing.”
Macnair rolled his eyes. “No, he is not here. But your bruises and knobs don’t make you look better so you better fix it before you see Lord Voldemort.”
“Ooh…That makes sense.” said Jessica perspicuously and opened the door.
The room was dark and fusty. “Anyone here?” asked Jessica. She saw something moving in the back of the room. It was an old tremulous woman sitting on a chair. “Go away.” said her with a shaky voice. Jessica looked in her face. It was Madam Pomfrey.
December 28th, 2003, 11:13 pm
Madam Pomfrey was the school nurse of Hogwarts when Jessica was at Hogwarts. She could have never thought that the friendly school nurse would be on evil side.
“Fix her face.” said Macnair to Madam Pomfrey with a bidding tone.
The old woman was standing up from the chair and moved slowly towards Jessica.
“Faster! We don’t have that much time.” said Macnair impatiently.
“Yes, sir.” sobbed the school nurse and moved faster. She looked so much older than the last time Jessica saw her. Crinkles were everywhere in her face and her eyes were full of fear. She pulled out her wand and pointed to Jessica. She muttered a spell and Jessica felt how her faces were changing into its old shape again.
She looked in the mirror that was placed next to her and saw that she looked normal again. Then she heard something dropping on the floor. Madam Pomfrey dropped her wand and was staring at her now.
“Jessica Lewis.” she whispered. Jessica looked on the floor without saying anything. She felt ashamed and she didn’t know why.
“Are you on the bad side?” asked Madam Pomfrey but she didn’t get an answer. “I can’t believe this. You were such a good girl, popular and everyone loved you. I even heard that you were in the Or…”
“Shut up.” yelled Jessica. Her heart beat faster. Madam Pomfrey almost broke her secret.
“I am not a good girl and I’ve never been a good girl. I’ve chosen to serve the Dark Lord and these jerks from the Order of the Phoenix kept me in captivity for a while. I hate everything that has to do with the order.”
Madam Pomfrey looked at her shocked and shook her head. “I can’t believe that.”
“Enough then.” said Macnair. “Crucio!” Madam Pomfrey screamed distracted with pain.
Jessica winced frightened. “What was that for?” asked her. “Just for fun.” said Macnair and laughed. Then he looked at her face.
“You are pretty. My name is James Macnair. Your name is Jessica, right?” Jessica nodded. “Let’s go." Macnair took her by her hand and left the hospital wing.
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