This is exactly what I wrote

Pottermore is the most fun when you are going through the moments and collecting items. Then you don't really know what the site is meant to be used for after that. Potions become repetitive, and it looks like duelling with never be available.

There needs to be more interactivity within the moments. Some moments don't have anything to do, and I find that ridiculous. Although I love the artwork, if there's no interactivity within a moment, it shouldn't be there.

Potion brewing shouldn't take that long. Even in the books potions is usually an hour to 90 minute long lesson, and you can't tell me that they spent the majority of that just sitting there waiting for their potion to brew? I think 20-30 minutes is more accurate.

All the spells should be available to practise with.

We should be able to read at least extracts from the books we collect, and we should be able to reread the information on chocolate frog cards we collect. Similarly, the other items we collect should have bearing on the rest of the moments. Perhaps you can only advance to the next moment if you have an item from an earlier moment?

Moments shouldn't be so easily to pass through. You should have to do a specific thing (even if it is just finding an item) in order to progress to the next stage.

I understand your policy on child safety, but there should be a way of holding a conversation with your Pottermore friends. Most people that use the site are probably over the age of 18 anyway, and at least over 13. Perhaps accounts that were set up using parents details do not allow a private messaging system?

Gringotts is a button at the top of the screen, but all it does is tells you your bank balance. This is also shown at the top of Diagon Alley, so why is Gringotts even required? A direct link to Wizards Duel would be more beneficial

Moderating of comments and images should not take a month.

You have created a very good database of characters, places, objects and other things, but I think there should be a search function for easy access. Say if I wanted to read the new information about McGonagall again, I would just have to search for her rather than remember what chapter and moment she was included in.

There should be more potions. I assume this might happen later on when we/Harry purchases more books.

You don't need to notify us that we accepted a friend request.

Some people have obviously been cheating at house point scoring. This should be more closely monitored.

I think that's all. I know its a lot of suggestions, but you have a good thing going here that still needs work in order to be at its potential.

Firstly, I want to let you know that I waited a month and half to gain access to the site - way too much: a die-hard Harry Potter fan like me can wait, but an occasional fan won't - and even then I couldn't actually use it, since Pottermore "[was] in overwhelming demand". I got purple 'overwhelming demand' screens for a week before I could finally navigate the site - slowly, but at least I could. Seriously, what were you thinking when you told everyone that 1 million people would get access before October? You were - and are not - prepared to handle such big a number of users. Not to mention how it's Harry Potter fans we're talking about, for crying out loud: it's a given that we're gonna crash servers no matter what, if we are promised new content by JK Rowling. And speaking of servers, can't you get more working?

Secondly, I have a feeling you misaimed your target audience. The Harry Potter books were released from 1997 to 2007; do some maths, and you'll find that the core Harry Potter audience ranges from 13 year-olds to 25 year-olds, with the addition of all the people who got into it in their adult years. Now, the site looks and works like it's targeting to pre-teens. While I'm sure there are Harry Potter fans of 13 years or less using the site, I don't think they are the majority of the users. This makes your 'Child Safety Policy' - however noble your intentions might have been, I'm sure - very irritating, and its only use is to alienate the majority of users, who are older than 13. Starting from the random usernames, which really don't make telling users apart easy. Or the comments, which have an annoying and completely useless character limit and whose moderation is de facto censorship: I understand filtering potentially dangerous content, but when the majority of your (harmless!) comments is moderated or rejected you know that something is way off. And if you can only comment with dumb "Well done"'s and "I liked it a lot"'s, you might as well remove comments completely. So yes, this is my piece of advice: revise your 'Child Safety Policy'.

The various Moments could use some music in the background. There are 8 Harry Potter movie soundtracks to choose from: use them!

The 'From the Story' snippets about characters and objects are useless: I already know very well that Harry is the protagonist and a 11 year old wizard, or that Dumbledore is the headmaster of Hogwarts. Want to know how to spice things up? Get NEW background information from JK Rowling for ALL the characters/objects, like you did for Minerva McGonagall. Because, let me tell you, reading the story of her life (or the bakground information on the Dursleys, for that matter) was AMAZING! It bears repeating: READING THE NEW CONTENT BY JK ROWLING WAS AMAZING!!! I was speechless and overwhelmed to get to know those things! And not only the new information, but also the 'behind the scenes' details and thoughts by Jo Rowling on the process of writing Harry Potter! I beg you: more content by Jo Rowling, pretty please!
That's what I expect Pottermore to do: provide NEW information from Jo Rowling as much as it is possible, and then some - everything else (illustrations, games, etc) is of secondary importance.

The whole experience could use more 'true' interaction, like the Sorting or getting your wand. For example, the Quidditch match: only catching the Snitch was boring, I expected to play the whole match, or something like that. The same goes for the chessboard: it would be awesome if you could actually play chess to advance in the storyline. Just clicking around to collect objects gets boring easily.

And now we get to Potions: brewing one takes way too long, you can't expect me to stay more than an hour in front of my computer waiting for a virtual potion to be ready! A brewing time of up to 20 minutes would be fine, though.

Wizarding Duels: FIX IT, for God's sake! I have never played it, not even once! It's been off for two months!

I wasn't happy with the feedback form on Pottermore: there should have been a box where you could type freely, so that people could tell you exactly what they liked and what they didn't like. And without having to spam the comments to the chapters, which is what happened at the end.

The Pottermore Insider is not as informative and transparent as I believe it should be: we want to know what you're up to, what bugs you're having, what you can and can't fix, and we want to be able to COMMENT on your posts. It should also be updated more often (read: DAILY), more transparent and - most importantly - it should PROVIDE ANSWERS TO OUR QUESTIONS! It's our only mean of communication with you (together with the Twitter feed): use it correctly, and don't alienate users by ignoring them!

By the way, speaking of the Twitter feed: hosting the 'House Pride Week' when two thirds of the users still didn't have access to Pottermore was just plain tacky and disrespectful. Your PR team could use some scolding.

And speaking of respecting users: don't forget that there are many Harry Potter fans who couldn't get past the Quill Challenge (or couldn't take part to it because they were on holiday - seriously, hosting it at the beginning of August, what were you thinking?) and who are dying to gain access to Pottermore. Be respectful: don't make them wait a thousand years to gain admittance!

I hope the e-books shop will be opened soon, I'm really looking forward to it. But the thing I'm looking forward to the most is HARRY POTTER AND THE CHAMBER OF SECRETS: get your act together and put it up as soon as possible!

Yes, I've just written more than 1000 words just to tell you what you should fix on Pottermore. I told you, Harry Potter fans are die-hard. :D

I did point out that I think they're going to run into major problems if they allow Galleon gifting, as people could just create multiple accounts to gift Galleons (I don't believe there's anything in the Terms of Use that forbids multiple account creation after the beta period), and that they'll have the same problem with the gifting system in general if they don't provide people with a way to earn Galleons, particularly the Potion-makers who'll run out of things. I also said I would expect a massive uptick on account activity in November, as people who are unhappy with their current House are likely to attempt to get a new account to re-Sort. I also told them that I think object collection without being able to see a description of it is pointless, and that I don't understand why I'm stealing random items from the Dursleys' home.

I also requested that they do a Pottermore Insider post on the Sorting and explain more about how House Points in the Great Hall are calculated (and asked them to re-order the banners in the Great Hall to match the arrangement of the House tables, although I really, really don't think they'll do it; that's just me being nitpicky.)