Re: Fan Scripts: Harry Potter Remakes
The next part of my new script, maybe I should put it in one post and delete the previous post, or just say go to post _
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What a cliffhanger!
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I've changed Scene 1 (The Prologue) slightly:
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I don't know what to do for the next scene, what to keep, what to leave out.
Last time I did the whole scene, even the sherbet lemons, and I don't know what should go... (Edit: The sherbet lemons were cut)
This is my old scene (cuts in red) it's really long, something has to go...
The old arrival scene: 
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I need help |
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Last edited by ArryGrotter; October 4th, 2007 at 11:25 pm.
Reason: Expand, fieldset
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