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Old November 26th, 2007, 8:25 pm
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Re: Fan Scripts: Remake Harry Potter

Originally Posted by Dementor13 View Post
HARRY: He never got murdered. He made a fatal mistake and arranged the whole thing with your faithful servant... Severus Snape. He stopped working for you once you killed my mother... the only woman he've ever loved.
"The man you THOUGHT was your faithful servant." And Severus stopped working for Voldie before Lily's death, not after (I think Harry's exact words were "from the moment you started hunting my mother.") Also, it isn't clear from the above that it wasn't DD who was in love with Lily, but Severus.

Otherwise, though, it's not bad at all.


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