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*ArryGrotter* · #44 October 26th, 2007, 10:22 pm

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Originally Posted by Blast_ended

ArryGrotter, you're film will probably be about 6 hours long... it's simply too long. I suggest you make a lot of cuts. The official version is much better.

I think I should say that, 1) I know it is much too long, 2) The scene I just posted (hut on the rock) is NOT my final cut, and I posted it there to see what should be cut (I post final cuts without the expand thing), and 3) in my mind there is no time limit...yet.

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Originally Posted by Blast_ended

I'm write now working on a DH script. It has a lot less cuts then my previous scripts (I ended up including stuff like Lily's letter). I hope you'll enjoy it and give me feedback. here it is:

DH Script - Until Kreacher:

DH

EXT. A STREET

Two men, both dressed in black, are walking together. They both are hooded, and we can't see their face yet.

PERSON 1
News?

The other person takes off his hood, we see it is SEVERUS SNAPE.

SNAPE
The best.

EXT. A STREET (FEW MOMENTS LATER)

The two men are walking until they reach a giant mansion. The other man now have his hood down too – it is YAXLEY. They reach a gate – They both roll back their sleeves to reveal the DARK MARK. They put it near a sensor-like object, and the gate opens.

INT. MALFOY MANSION, DRAWING ROOM

The room is full of people. LORD VOLDEMORT is sitting in the biggest chair. To his sides we can see some familiar faces: DRACO MALFOY, LUCIOS MALFOY, BELLATRIX LESTRANGE, PETER PETTIGREW and some random DEs. an apparently unconscious human figure hanging upside down over the table, revolving slowly as if suspended by an invisible rope. We can't see it's face yet.

LORD VOLDEMORT
Yaxley, Snape – you're late.

YAXLEY
It was a little trickier than I expected.. But I'm glad to announce I have good news, my lord.

SNAPE
I got some good news too, my lord.

LORD VOLDEMORT
So? What's the news?

SNAPE
My Lord, the Order of the Phoenix intends to move Harry Potter from his current place of safety on Saturday next, at nightfall.

LORD VOLDEMORT
Saturday… at nightfall. Good. And this information comes -

SNAPE
– from a very reliable source, my lord.

LORD VOLDEMORT
Where are they going to hide the boy next?

SNAPE
At the home of one of the Order. The place, according to the source, has been given every protection that the Order could provide. I think that there is little chance of taking him once he is there, my Lord.

LORD VOLDEMORT
Very well. If we could not get to him where he's going, we'll get him while he's travelling. Yaxley – I was under the impression you brought some news too.

YAXLEY
I have some good news indeed, my lord. I have – with difficulty, and after great effort – succeeded in placing an Imperius Curse upon Pius Thicknesse.

LORD VOLDEMORT
It is a start, But Thicknesse is only one man. Scrimgeour must be surrounded by our people before we try to kill him.

YAXLEY
Yes – my Lord, that is true – but you know, as Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement, Thicknesse has regular contact not only with the Minister himself, but also with the Heads of all the other Ministry departments. It will, I think, be easy now that we have such a high-ranking official under our control, to subjugate the others, and then they can all work together to bring Scrimgeour down.

LORD VOLDEMORT
Very well then, Yaxley.

He suddenly points his wand on the unconscious figure above them; it come backs to life, and we finally sees it's face – it is Ollivander, the wand maker.

LORD VOLDEMORT
Hello, Ollivander.

OLLIVANDER
Please… no… I'll do anything…

LORD VOLDEMORT
That's the spirit, Ollivander. Now I need some information for you…

Music begins. Camera zoom out of the window, and on the skies we see the writing:

HARRY POTTER AND THE DEATHLY HALLOWS.

INT. HARRY'S ROOM

UNCLE VERNON
BOY!!!

Harry looks irritated but goes downstairs.

INT. DURSLEY'S LIVING ROON

All three durselys in the living room.

HARRY
What now? Changed your mind again?

UNCLE VERNON
It can't be real, what you're saying. It's just a plot to capture us and… well, we're not going.

HARRY
Capture you? Not real? Are you actually as stupid as you look? They'll torture you and kill you!!

UNCLE VERNON
Who are they?

HARRY
Voldemort! Death Eatres – his followers. Dementors. Giants. Inferius. You don't want all these at you, don't you?

UNCLE VERNON
But what do they want from us?

HARRY
They are looking for me. They know you are close to me. We suspect they will try to torture you to give them my whereabouts, or hold you as hostages believing I'll come to rescue you.

UNCLE VERNON
So what do you offer?

HARRY
Protection. The best there is. You'll be hidden in much better ways then you can probably imagine, and if Voldemort finds you anyway, then you'll have a whole bunch of wizards trying to defend you.

DUDLEY (SCARED)
Daddy, I'm going with this order lot.

HARRY
Very well then. They'll pick you up in a few minutes.

INT. DURSLEY'S ENTRANCE, LATER

The door is open and two wizards – Dedalous Digel and Hestia Jones stand behind it. The three Dursleys, all with bags in their hands, turn to leave. Harry is looking at them from behind.

UNCLE VERNON
Goodbye then, boy.

HARRY
Bye.

They turn to leave. Petunia hesitate. For a minute it looks like she have something to say… but then she turns away without a word.

INT. DURSLEY'S ENTRANCE, LATER

A knock on the door.

HARRY
Who's there?

MOODY
It's us.

Harry opens the door, and he find Lupin and Moody in the front, both with their wands aimed at him.

LUPIN
What's your Patronous and who taught you to do it?

HARRY
A stag. And it was you who did it.

Both lower their wand.

LUPIN
New security measures. I had to check you're not an impostor.

HARRY
That's fine. Come inside.

The two of them come in, followed by Tonks, Kingsley, Ron, Hermione, Bill, Fleur Fred, George, Ginny, Arthur and Hagrid.

HARRY
I didn't expected so many of you!

MOODY
Change of plan. Voldemort has managed to get a few people inside the ministry. They have way of capturing people who's apparating or using the floo network. We'll have to move in the open.

HARRY
But how are we going to move?

MOODY
Broomstick. Thesthrals. Flying Motorbikes.

HARRY
But if the Death Eaters spot us…

MOODY
I forgot to mention the key point. There will be seven Harry Potters in the sky tonight. You… and six impostors. Each one of us are going to fly into a different safehouse, from which we are going to take a portkey to the borrow. If Death Eaters spot us, they wouldn't know who to attack.

HARRY
NO! I won't put six of you in danger because…

MOODY
You have no choice, son.

LUPIN
And beside, the impostors won't be in danger, because Voldemort want you alive, Harry. The protectors, however…

MOODY
We're all going to be alright if we'll stick to the plan. Let's go now.

EXT. DURSLEY'S OUTSIDE, LATER

People all around Harry drink. While them transform, Hagrid turns to Harry.

HAGRID
You'll be with me, alright Harry? And we'll be flying on Sirius old motorbike. Arthur had installed a few tricks in it, so if the Death Eaters spot us… we'll have a few surprises for them.

Fred and George drink and transform to 2 Harry’s.

FRED & GEORGE
Wow, were identical!

MOODY
OK everybody, here we go!

EXT. FLYING IN THE OPEN

With a great ROAR, The flying motorbike is taking off and going to the sky, followed by everybody else. Hedwig is sitting in a cage near Harry. Suddenly, out of nowhere, loads of death eaters are surrunding them. Four of them are chasing Harry and Hagrid.

HAGRID
We’ll teach them not to mess with us!

He clicks on a red button, and with a great roar a lot of fire is going out of the motorbike’s back, hitting the DE.

HAGRID
That one was my idea.

HARRY
We didn’t get rid of them yet! Look!

A random death eater approach, pointing his wand at them.

DEATH EATER
Avada Ke-

HARRY
Stupifey!

The death eater is frozen, fell of his broom.

HARRY
NO! I didn’t want him to fall down, I don’t want them dead -

HAGRID
He tried to kill ye, Harry! And beside, he’s not dead, he still got his wand, he’ll save himself!

They are flying fast when a second DE approach

DEATH EATER
Avada Kedavra!

The motorcycle takes a sharp turn to avoid the green light, which hits the side of it – Hedwig. Hedwing falls in her cage, dead.

HARRY
NO! HEDWIG! NO!

Harry clicks on the red button himself this time. Fire is going out Sirius motorcycle again.

HAGRID
Hold on Harry!

HARRY
HAGRID! OVER THERE! IT’S HIM! VOLDEMORT...

Camera goes to show Voldemort flying without any suppurt, attacking a nearby pair on a broom.

VOLDEMORT
Avada Kedavra!

His curse hits Mad-Eye Moody full in the face. Moody falls backwards, of his broom and out of sight.

HARRY
NO! MAD-EYE!

Voldemort turns to face them, but Hagrid clicks on the red button again and he dissapear out of sight.

HARRY
Mad-eye...

HAGRID
There’s nothing you can do for him now, Harry. We’ll just have to get ourselves safely.

Another three death eaters block their way.

DEATH EATER
It’s the real Potter! That’s his owl!

HARRY
EXPELIARMUS!

The DE wand is flying out of his hand.

HAGRID
Hold tight Harry, wer’re nearly there!

HARRY
QUICK! IT’S HIM!

Voldemort approach, his wand raised and pointed at Harry.

VOLDEMORT
Avada Kedavra!

Hagrid takes a very sharp turn and the green light miss them. However he falls to the side because the turn is so sharp.

HARRY
HAGRID!

Voldemort turn to Harry again, pointing his wand at Harry – and then he’s hitten in a invisible barrier and stay behind. Harry crashes down. Molly, Fred, Arthur, Kingsley, Bill, Fleur, Hermione, Lupin and Ginny comes from behind them.

MOLLY
Harry! You’re alright?

HARRY
I am, but Hagrid – over there!

Arthur and Kingsley approach him.

ARTHUR
He’s fine!

HARRY
What stopped Voldemort?

MOLLY
Must have been our protecting charms. We worked really hard on them.

HARRY
Oh, and... well, it’s Mad-Eye. He’s dead.

Everybody turn white and pale.

HARRY
Voldemort did it. I saw it.

HERMIONE
Mad-Eye? But he can’t die, he always seemed so tough!

LUPIN
Yeah, but when Voldemort wants to kill you... well, you don’t have a lot of chance. Anyway, Voldemort acted excatly as Mad-Eye suspected he would – he attacked the toughest auror first, believing that Harry will probably be with them.

HARRY
That’s why he got to me and Hagrid so late.

Quiet falls down.
HARRY
Where are Ron, George and Tonks?

MOLLY
Ron and Tonks are not here yet. And George... he’s inside.

HARRY
Is he alright?

LUPIN
He was hit by Snape. He’s fine, but... he lost his ear. Come inside to see him.

INT. THE BURROW

Everybody enters. George is sitting in a chair, with bandage all around his ear.

ARTHUR
How do you feel?

GEORGE
Saint-like.

FRED (PALE)
What? (turns to his mother) Is he okay? Isn’t his mind affected?

GEORGE
I feel holy. Holey. Geddit, Fred? Holey.

FRED (NORMAL AGAIN)
Pathetic! From all the wide world of ear related homour you went with holey?

George laughs.

GEORGE
Where’s the others anyway?

ARTHUR
Mad-eye’s dead.

GEORGE
No! He can’t be...

All fall silent again. A look on Lupin’s pale and worried face.

HARRY
You’re alright, Remus?

LUPIN
Yes, it’s just that... I’m worried for Dora. Tonks, as you call her.

Harry looks confused.

LUPIN
You don’t even know, do you? Didn’t we tell you?

KINGSLEY
Well, we had other things on our mind. Getting Harry in here safely, for example.

LUPIN
Well, Dora and I are getting married.

HARRY
Really? Congratulations!

LUPIN
Thank you, Harry. Here they are, I think!

Tonks and Ron approach, flying on a broom. Both look exhausted with minor injuries on their body.

LUPIN
Dora!

Lupin runs forward and hug his wife. Harry runs to see Ron, but Hermione gets there first and hug him.

LUPIN
What kept you?

TONKS
It’s Bellatrix. She tried very hard to kill me.

FRED
But why would she do that?

Nobody answers. Tonks and Lupin share a very grim look between each other.

TONKS
I’m glad you’re all safe. But where’s Mad-Eye?

LUPIN
He... he was murdered. By Voldemort.

They all fall silent, sharing grim looks.

INT. A DARK ROOM

CUT to a dark room. A old scared man is bowing to an unseen character.

MR. OLLIVANDERS
NO! Please don’t kill me... I’ll do anything...

LORD VOLDEMORT (ANGRY)
Then tell me how to overcome Harry Potter!

MR. OLLIVANDER
I don’t know... Please...

LORD VOLDEMORT
You are no use to me if you don’t know, Ollivander! Perhaps I’ll kill you and finish with it!

MR. OLLIVANDER
NO! Please... I might be able to help you...

LORD VOLDEMORT
You are able, Ollivander. I need information. And you better be able to give it to me…

INT. HARRY’S BEDROOM

We cut to Harry’s bedroom. Harry is lying on the floor, sweating, holding his scar. Ron and Hemrione approach him.

HERMIONE
Harry? What happend? You... you look terrible!

HARRY (SITS UP)
Better than Ollivander, I expect.

RON
Ollivander? The wandmaker? What happend to him?

HARRY
Voldemort’s holding him as a hostage. He’s trying to get information from him.

RON
Information? About what?

HARRY
I don’t know.

Silence fall.
HARRY
When... when are we leaving, then?

RON
Leaving?

HARRY
We got 4 Horcruxes to destroy, and then Voldemort himself!

RON
Right... Remus and Tonks wedding is tommorow. I think we should stay, and then we can leave...

HERMIONE
Fine then. I’ll pack early, just in case we have to make a quick escape.

RON
What about that locket? Wasn't it taken by this guy, RAB?

HERMIONE
Yes, we'll need to find him.

HARRY
But... If you’ll leave with me, you don’t reckon they’ll... they’ll try to attack your family to get information on my whereabout?

HERMIONE
Though of that already. I bewitched my parents to think they are different people, and to make them forget they have a daughter, and they are now in Australia.

HARRY (SHOCKED)
Wow... what about you, Ron? You can’t hide your whole family, can’t you?

RON
No, but I found a solution too. Follow me.

INT. HIGHEST FLOOR ON THE BORROW.

The trio climb the stairs to reach the last bedroom. Ron enter.

RON
This, Harry, is the old family Ghoul.

We see the ghoul, dressed in pyjamas and with red hair.

HARRY
I still don’t get it.
RON
He’s going to be me... with Spattergroit. That’s a really terrible disease, you see. We’re going to put out a word that I’m ill, and when the Death Eaters wil come, we can show them the ghoul.

HARRY
But... it dosen’t look like you at all, Ron.

RON
Well... Spattergroit messes with your skin, so when you have it – you do not look like yourself at all. And it dosen’t matter he can’t talk either, because apparently when you’re sick with it, you can’t talk.

HARRY
It’s brilliant.

INT. BURROW LIVING ROOM, LATER THAT DAY.

The living room is crowded. Everyone comes to hug Harry. Molly Weasley comes forward with a big, snitch-shaped cake.

MOLLY
Happy birthday, Harry!

HARRY
Thank you, Mrs. Weasley.

RON
Where's dad?

MOLLY
He's still at work. He got a lot to do…

Hagrid comes to Harry.

HAGRID
Happy birthday, Harry!

HARRY
Thank you, Hagrid.

HAGRID
Couldn’t think what to get you, but then I found this...

Hands out the pouch.

HAGRID
Put anything in it, and no one but the owner can open it!

HARRY
That’s really cool. Thank you!

Suddenly a Weasel Patronus arrive.

RON
Dad.

PATRONUS
Minister coming with me.

Suddenly Lupin starts moving fast.

LUPIN
I got to go Harry; Sorry, I'll explain later. Come, Dora.

He and Tonks disappears. Arthur Weasley and Rufus Scrimegour enters the borrow.

SCRIMEGOUR
Sorry to intrude, especially as I can see that I am gate-crashing a party. (Turns to harry) Many happy returns.

HARRY
Thanks, minister.

SCRIMEGOUR
I want a private word with you, Harry Potter. Also with Mr. Ronald Weasley and Miss Hermione Granger, If I can.

Arthur opens his mouth to resist; but Harry stops him.

HARRY
Fine.

INT. SITTING ROOM

HARRY
Well then. What did you want?

SCRIMEGOUR
I am here because of the will of Albus Dumbledore. He left the three of you a few items.

RON
You mean… me and Hermione too?

SCRIMEGOUR
Certainly. Would you say you were close to Dumbledore, Ronald?

RON
Me? Not -- not really... It was always Harry who...

Hermione gives him a "Shut up" look.

HERMIONE
You're being modest, Ron. Dumbledore was very fond of you. So what did he left us?

SCRIMEGOUR
To Mr. Ronald Weasley, he left his Deluminator.

RON
The what?

HERMIONE
Deluminator, Ronald. It has the power to suck all the lights from the room. One of Dumbledore's own design.

Scrimegour hand the Deluminator to Ron, who looks at it, stunned.

SCRIMEGOUR
To Ms. Hermione Granger, he left his copy of "The Tales of Beedle the Bard".

Hermione takes the book.

SCRIMEGOUR
This, Mrs. Granger, is a children book. Why did he left you this book?

HERMIONE
He… he knew I like books. Must have though I'll enjoy it.

Scrimegour looks unsatisfied, but goes on.

SCRIMEGOUR
To Harry James Potter, he left… the snitch you caught on your first Quidditch match.

He hands the ball to Harry, who takes it, confused.

SCRIMEGOUR
Why did he left you this Snitch, Mr. Potter? Is there anything you can think of that Dumbledore would like to give you without us knowing?

HARRY
No. Why?

SCRIMEGOUR
Because a snitch is a perfect hiding place for a small object. It remembers the touch of the first person to touch it, and it can bewitched to open itself only to that person. Therefore, no one but you will be able to open that snitch. Take it, Potter.

A dramatic pause. Harry hesitates, but takes the snitch; nothing happens.

SCRIMEGOUR (DISSAPOINTED)
Well then. Dumbledore left you one more thing.

HARRY
What is it?

SCRIMEGOUR
The sword of Godric Gryffindor.

HARRY
Where is it then?

SCRIMEGOUR
Unfortunately that sword was not Dumbledore's to give away. The sword of Godric Gryffindor is an important historical artifact, and as such, belongs to Hogwarts and not do Dumbledore.

HERMIONE
But it's not –

SCRIMEGOUR
I am not here to argue, Miss Granger. I'm afraid I must leave now. I am a busy man, you know.

And with that he turns away, leaving Harry, Ron and Hermione alone.

HERMIONE
Why do you… why do you think Dumbledore left us these objects? The Deluminator? A children book? An old Snitch?

RON
When you took it, Harry, I was sure something was going to happen.

HARRY
Well, yeah… I wasn't going to try too hard in front of Scrimgeour, was I?

HERMIONE
What do you mean?

HARRY
My first Quidditch match, Hermione.

EXT. QUIDDITCH FIELD (FLASHBACK)
Harry, eleven years old, reaches for the snitch, and jumps on it. Minutes later, he spits it from his mouth.

INT. SITTING ROOM
RON
That was the one you nearly swallowed!

HARRY
Yes. And now we shall see...

Harry puts the Snitch in his mouth. Small writing appear on it: I OPEN AT THE CLOSE.

HARRY
I open at the close. But what is the close?

They all fall silent, unknowing.

EXT. BURROW GARDEN

The garden is very decorated (leave that to the decoration people). Harry and Ron, both dressed in dress robes, goes through the wedding, talking with random guests. Suddenly DOBBY approaches, his hands full of food.

DOBBY
Harry Potter!

HARRY
Dobby! What are you doing here?

DOBBY
Working, Harry Potter. Master Lupin and Mistress Tonks hired me as a waitress.

RON
That's great. Better than your last job, anyway.
DOBBY
Yes, Harry Potter. Dobby is still grateful that you released him from the Malfoys! But Dobby got to go now. The ceremony will begin in any second!

HARRY
Bye, Dobby!

With that, he leaves.

EXT. BURROW GARDEN (MOMENTS LATER)

Remus and Tonks are standing on the stage, hand in hand. Between them a little man stands.

LITTLE MAN
I declare you bonded for life.

Everyone applause. Now Luna Lovegood comes, dressed in extremely weird yellow robes.

LUNA
Hello Harry. Hello Ron.

HARRY
Hey Luna. What kept you?

LUNA
One of the garden gnomes bit me (shows him the bite).

RON
That must hurt.

LUNA
It's nothing, really. They are seriously misunderstood creatures, Gnomes. Or to use their correct name - Gernumbli gardensi.

Ron gives a loud snort. A song starts.

LUNA
Oh, I love this song.

She starts to dance, alone, waving her arms.

GINNY (O.S.)
Harry? Can you come here for a moment?

Harry turns to see Ginny looking at him, a determined look on her face.

HARRY
Yeah, fine.
EXT. GARDEN, DESERTED SPOT, HIDDEN BETWEEN BUSHES

Ginny takes Harry by the hand to a hidden spot. She looks at him.

GINNY
You might have noticed, I haven't got you a birthday present.

HARRY
You didn't have to get me anything.

GINNY
I couldn't think what to get you. I wanted something you could take with you… wherever you're going. I though –I'd like you to have something to remember me by, you know, if you meet some veela when you're off.
HARRY
I think dating opportunities are going to be pretty thin on the ground, to be honest.

GINNY
There's the silver lining I've been looking for.

And with that, she kisses him. They kiss for a few seconds, full of desire, then interrupted by sudden panic voices. They break apart.

GINNY
What the - ?

They look back at the garden, where a silver lynx patronus is standing.

PATRONUS
The ministry has fallen. The Minister is dead. They are coming.

EXT. BURROW GARDEN

Everyone panic, and suddenly hooded death eaters are anywhere on the garden, firing spells at everyone. Harry and Ginny comes to help, but Hermione comes quick, moves Harry out of the way.

HERMIONE
They must not know you're here! Come on, we got to escape, I've packed everything, where is Ron? Thank goodness, there he is, come QUICK!

Ron comes, the three of them hold hands.

HERMIONE
One…

- and then a Death Eater see them -

HERMIONE
Two…

He points his wand –

HERMIONE
Three!

They disappear.

EXT. TOTTENHAM COURT ROAD.

The three of them fall in a dark wide street, surrounded by people.

RON
Where are we?

HERMIONE
Tottenham Court Road. First place I could think of.
HARRY
We got to go back, Hermione, what if Voldemort's there, we got to make sure they're safe -

HERMIONE
We can’t worry about that now. It’s you they’re after, Harry, and we’ll just put everyone in even more danger by going back.

They keep walking.

RON
What about our stuff? Our clothes and all?

HERMIONE
It's all here in the bag (points at a small bag).

HARRY
How could possibly so many things could be in there?

HERMIONE
Undetectable Extension Charm. Tricky, but I think I’ve done it okay; anyway, I managed to fit everything we need in here. We need to find a place to change –

RON
Let's just go to the bathrooms of a café or something. Here – there's one over there –

They enter the café.

INT. A CAFE.

Trio go to the bathroom, but before they reach the door 2 Death Eaters blow the door apart. They points their wands at Harry, but Harry hits them first.

HARRY
Stupify!

DE1 falls down.

DE2 aim a curse but misses;

HERMIONE
Petrificus Totalos!

The curse hits him in the chest, and he falls down.

RON
How did they find us?

HERMIONE
I don't know, but that's really worrying. We have to clean after ourselves, then get out of here.

RON
What do you mean, "Clean after ourselves"? You don't mean… kill them, right?

HARRY
No need to. We'll just wipe their memories.

HERMIONE
Fine. Oblivate! Oblivate (At the second DE)!.

They both have a vacant look on their face.

RON
We need a safe place to hide.

HARRY
Grimmauld Place.

HERMIONE
Don't be silly, Snape can get in there!

HARRY
So what? I’d like nothing better than to meet Snape! He killed Dumbledore, remember? And besides, Lupin told me they set all kinds of curses against him, and him only – so he should have a problem getting into the house.

HERMIONE
Fine then. Both of you, take my hand.

They disappear.

INT. GRIMMAULD PLACE.

Trio arrives at Grimmauld Place. The place is quiet, but very, VERY messy.

RON
You don't… you don't think there's anyone else in here, do you?

HERMIONE
We can check. Humanium Revalio!

Nothing happens.

HERMIONE
There's nobody here, then. It's safe.

RON
It looks like someone was here, though.

They walk onto the next room, closing the door behind them.

INT. GRIMMAULD PLACE, MORNING.

The trio lie on the floor, in sleeping bags. Ron and Hermione are asleep, but Harry is awake. He silently gets up, and start walking.

INT. GRIMMAULD PLACE, SIRIUS'S BEDROOM, MORNING.

Harry silently enter Sirius's bedroom, all decorated with Gryffindor colors. There are many pictures of Muggle motorcycles, and also several posters of bikini-clad Muggle girls. On the wall, there is a big picture of 4 people: James, Sirius, Lupin and Pettigrew. They all looks younger and very happy. Harry looks at the picture for a while, then looks at the table, where he sees a little LETTER and a PICTURE; he picks it up.

LILY (V.O.)
Dear Padfoot, Thank you, thank you, for Harry’s birthday present! I'm sorry you couldn't be here, it was very quiet. We had a tea with old Bathilda, she's so nice to us. She has all sorts of stories, and –

HERMIONE (O.S)
Harry?

Harry turns around, sees Hermione looking at him.

HARRY
Hey. Good morning.

HERMIONE
Please don't disappear like that again, me and Ron got really worried.

HARRY
Sorry. Look what I found.

He hands her the letter, which she reads.

HERMIONE
But isn't that your…

HARRY
My mother.

HERMIONE
The signature is gone, though. Someone ripped it off.

HARRY
There's this, too.

He shows her the picture, shows James Potter, Young Harry. The picture is ripped at the side.

HERMIONE
It's ripped too.

HARRY
But why should someone want to rip an old picture of me?

HERMIONE
I don't know, but anyway – we came to tell you something. We found RAB.

INT. GRIMMAULD PLACE, CORRIDOR, MORNING.

Harry and Hermione goes down the stairs, to find Ron inside a room. On the door we see the sign:

Do Not Enter
Without the Express Permission of
Regulus Arcturus Black

HARRY
Sirius's brother?

HERMIONE
It makes sense, doesn't it? He was a death eater once, wasn't he? And then he was died – Voldemort probably killed him because he knew about his Horcruxes!

HARRY
So? Did you find the locket?

RON
I don't think it's here, Harry.

HARRY
Well, there's someone we could ask. Kreacher!

I like this to a large extent.
Things I didn't like:
The cut from "I want some info, Olivander" to the title was weird (but got understanderable slightly later.)
Dobby the WAITRESS??

(Waiter)

I did like the adaption for T___ Court Road (Can't remember what it's called) and many other things as well.