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Old February 10th, 2006, 5:09 pm
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Water Lilys-Year 1

This is one of my first fanfic so i hope you like it Feedback needed and if i get 1 review i will post the next chapter tomorrow i alredy have it written here is the link http://www.cosforums.com/showthread.php?t=84227
Chapter 1:
Old Doors Close New Doors Open


“Are you sure?” asked Lily she grinned slightly.

“Of course you will love it,” answered Lily’s older sister Petunia brushing one of her golden curls from her face.

“I’m not sure about this secondary school Saint Michael’s that you go to,” replied Lily her grin vanished and her flaming red eyebrows bunched.

“Don’t worry no matter what I will always be there for you,” Petunia told Lily hugging her, her sky blue eyes full of warmth and happiness.

This was the last happy moment the sisters shared what would happen next would scar there lives forever.

“Lily come here there is a letter for you.” yelled her mother from the kitchen.

Lily jumped off the bed and bounced into the kitchen her flaming red hair dancing around her young and carefree face while her older sisters beautiful figure followed her into the kitchen.

“Here you are sweet.” Lily’s mother announced handing her a thick envelope.

Lily took the thick envelope into her hands.

There was a purple wax seal holding the letter closed there was a Lion, a Snake, a Badger and an Eagle surrounding the letter H. Underneath the H was a motto Lily didn’t understand

“Draco Dormiens Nunquam Titillandus”

She turned the letter over in her hand, on the other side in emerald ink (the same color as her eyes) was the address.

Miss Lily Evans
3rd Bedroom
114 Rosewood Dr.
London England
H1J 2P7


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Old February 10th, 2006, 10:03 pm
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Re: Water Lilys-Year 1

Here is the chapter i promised as long as I got feedback this chapter is dedicated to Claire_13 thanx for my first review! I have the 3rd part to the chapter ready and as long as i get 2 reviews the chapter is yours!!!! So post some feedback the link is in my Signature!
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“They know where I sleep,” Lily commented shocked.

“That’s impossible,” Petunia said turning around from her conversation on what they should have for Lunch.

Lily carefully started opening the thick envelope being careful not to tear it.

Lily pulled the letter out it was made out of thick heavy parchment. She carefully unfolded the letter and read it.

Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry

Headmaster: Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore
(Order of Merlin, First Class Grand Sorc., Supreme Mugwump)

Dear Miss Evans
We are pleased to inform you that you have a place at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.
Term Begins on September 1. We await your owl by no later than 31 of July

Yours Sincerely

Armando Dippet
Former Headmaster

P.S Please send your answer with the Scops owl outside on your porch.

Lily didn’t say anything her red eyebrows raised and her emerald eyes widened.

“ Is this your idea of a joke,” asked Lily turning to her parents and Petunia who were now contemplating on whether they should have chips or pasta for Lunch.

“What dear,” asked her mum turning to Lily and reaching for the letter?

Lily’s mother read the letter a few times before handing it to her father.

“I didn’t do it sweat,” answered her mother reaching for her cup of tea on the table.

Petunia was reading the letter over her Father's shoulder she scowled and then
ran out of the kitchen and to the front door.

Just like the letter stated there was a tiny owl on their porch Petunia shrieked as the owl flew toward them onto Lily’s arm.

Lily stroked the small owl as it let out a high pitched hoot.

Petunia shrieked once more and yelled “I am not having a witch in my home.”

She ran down hall into her room and slammed her door. Lily was appalled she returned to the kitchen with the owl on her hand letting out high pitched hoots.

“I didn’t do it either Lily,” her father said as she entered the kitchen.

The kitchen was full of the smell of baking chips in a few minutes.


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Old February 25th, 2006, 3:10 pm
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“I don’t think it is a joke Lily,” her Mother said adding some oil to the baking chips.

“I don’t think it is either,” Lily said after few minutes of thought.

The owl on the table hooted and Lily noticed a tag around its neck it had the name Mandagora on it.

“I want to give it a chance,” Lily said putting some ketchup onto her chips “I mean what is the worst that could happen?”

“Well the worst thing that could happen is that you turn into a horrible-,” Petunia shouted she had obviously been eves dropping.

“That is enough Petunia, It is Lily’s choice and the worst thing that could happen would be that it would be a joke, their Father said sternly.

Petunia scowled and went to sit down still glaring evily at Lily.

The next few minutes went by quietly the only sound that was made was the forks scraping off the plates and the occasional high pitched hoot of the owl.

Finally when the owl gave a particularly high pitched hoot Lily’s Mother made Lily let the owl outside so it could stay in the Birch tree outside in their backyard.

Lily picked the owl off the table and brought it to the open window and letting it fly outside.

The owl perched itself on a branch in the Birch tree.

“Mum its collar’s fallen off,” said Lily pointing to the ground outside.

“We will get it later dear, now come and finish your breakfast.

The dark clouds had suddenly begain to let out plump droplets of water splettering on everything.

Lily turned to go back to the table when something else caught her eye.

It was another little owl hopping toward the birch tree it turned it head staring into her eyes with its large yellow unblinking eyes.

“There’s another,” she shouted pointing to the other owl now under the tree..

Her mother crained her neck to look outside the window.

“ Well so it is , aw it’s so sweet,” her mother said turning to where Lily had been a few seconds earlier.

Lily had already opened the back door and thrown herself outside into the rain.


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Old February 25th, 2006, 6:38 pm
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Though you might like another part!! Dedicated to my friend Rajiv
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The Rain Splattered Lily’s face and hair as she rain toward the Owl.

This owl was very different from the tiny one in the tree.

This one was fat and plump it was the size of a basketball.

The owl fluttered up to the lowest branch and gave a low rumbling hoot.

Lily raised her foot and began to climb the tree.

The wind ruffled the leaves and branches of the tree.

The rain splattered her clothes.

Finally Lily perched herself on one of the highest branches.

She looked out at the town.

Lily could see what looked like forever.

She though about all that had happened, all that would change the flight of her life forever.

As a particularly hard wind blew Lily remembered when she had fallen off the top branches of the tree.

Her parents had rushed her to the doctors and the doctor told her she was fine which was quite strange since most people would have died from such a fall like that.

Another time something strange had happened was when a bully was attempting to punch her all his hair had suddenly fallen out.


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Old March 1st, 2006, 10:44 pm
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Heres the next part to the chapter hope you like it!!!! This chapter is dedicated to my best friends Keerthy, Megan, and Rajiv!!!
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Lots of strange things seemed to follow the Evans girl, that is why everyone stood at least 3 meters away from that strange girl.

Petunia on the other hand was the most popular girl in school beautiful and friendly, but get on the wrong side of the older Evans sister and you would receive a lifetime grudge.

Lily on the other hand could simply not hold a grudge, never in her entire life had she held a grudge.

For Lily it was impossible, but Lily could pretend that she had a grudge she was a great actress.

Lily stared out into the town the rain was pelting everything with plump raindrops.

A cat a few streets away was running for shelter underneath a car.

A old lady with a walker was crossing the street with a blue umbrella doing some kind of dance as she went.

As Lily looked at the neighbors front lawn she spotted a tabby cat with strange markings around its eyes.

The cat looked at her and she thought she saw it smile.

"I am imagining things." Lily thought.

Lily swung her feet back and forth daydreaming.

Lily couldn’t believe it, she was a witch.

Lily had read lots of stories about witches and wizards.

Lily loved reading her favorite types of books were science books and fiction.

Lily loved science and hoped to become a scientist when she grew up, and Lily loved fantasy stories they carried her into another land where everything was possible.

She loved stories with witches but never in her wildest dreams had she imagined herself as one.

Lily pictured herself flying a broomstick she smiled.

“ I wonder if I will be good at witchcraft” thought Lily.

Lily’s thoughs were interrupted by a loud sound of breaking Metal.

Where it came from Lily didn’t know.

Startled Lily fell of the branch she was sitting on.

Lily had managed to grasp herself onto a slightly lower branch.

She looked down the rain still spitting, and too her horror there was the vicious dog from next door.

It was growling and clawing at the bottom of the tree.

“Must hold on,” thought Lily her left hand slipping slightly.

Lily was terrified of the dog, she had been chased by it last summer and it had jumped on her.

Lily left hand slipped hanging by one hand Lily shouted “Mum!!!!”

There was no answer she wished for her life her mother was going to come.

“Well at least their other dog isn’t here,” thought Lily.

Lily looked down again and to her horror a bigger dog had arrived.

The neighbors other dog.

Lily’s mother ran outside with an umbrella over her head.

It was too late Lily let go.


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Re: Water Lilys-Year 1

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Lily sat upright quickly her breath quickend the room was dark for the scarlet curtains were drawn.

Lily groped for something on her nighttable she finally found what she was looking for she picked up a sleek willow wand ten and a half inches.

Lily furrowed her brow trying to remember one of the spells she had come across in a book.

She unfurrowed her brow and muttered something light shot out of the tip of her wand lighting the room.

It revealed 6 four poster beds with scarlet curtains all but 1 was drawn.

The bed belonged to one of her friends Estrella Lainevel who said that her bed gave off a bad aura and insisted in sleeping on the ground.

The bed next to her's belonged to her best friend Alice Durmlin.

Lily got up and began going quitely toward the washroom but as she tiptoed past Estrella she opened her large grey eyes and got up as though she was up for hours and was mearly pretending to sleep.

Lily shook here head and grinned slightly " What were you doing," she whispered.

"Sleeping of course," she replied in her soft dreamy voice.

"You sleep very strangly," whispered Lily continuing to the bathroom.

"No I dont," Estrella said softly bouncing through the bathroom door with Lily "and you have a strange toothbrush,"

Lily froze putting the toothpaste onto a purple toothbrush and bunched her eyebrows together and Estrella took out out a silver toothbrush covered in gold moons and stars.

Lily didnt say anything while she pulled on a red plaid skirt a red t-shirt.

Estrella on the other hand ranted about how if she ever had a daughter she would name her Luna while she pulled on a long golden skirt and a silver shirt covered in golden stars and moons.

"Want to go for a walk before breakfast," asked Estrella as the excited the common room.

"Sure," anwsered Lily.

Estrella said nothing more on the subject and ranted on about how she would name her son if she ever had one Galaxie.

Finally Estrella stopped ranting as they pushed the front doors open.

It appeared that they were not the only ones that were up this early tons of students where scattered among the grounds including that horrible James Potter and his friends.

"The sky is beautiful today," Estrella said to Lily looking up " Hello Sky," she shouted.

"Yes it is," said Lily also looking up.

The sky was cloudless and was a bright blue like a robin's egg.

Lily suddenly flew forward into the lake she panicked flapping her arms frantically "I cant swim she screamed,"

Lily suddenly reliazed who had pushed her James Potter.

"Nethier can I," shouted Estrella to Lily.

Lily begain to go down it looked like everything was going in slow motion nothing was going to save her now or was it something grabbed her and pushed her out of the water.


Lily slowly opened her eyes and saw a group of people surrounding her. She reliazed she was in the hospital wing.

Slowly her eyes begain to focus and she could tell who the people where on her left was Alice then Estrella then Potter , Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Peter Petagrew then Gideon Prewett.

"Gideon Prewett," thought Lily " Why is he here?"

The an idea popped into her head was he the one that save her?


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Re: Water Lilys-Year 1

"Did you save me?" asked Lily sitting up.

He nodded his grey eyes were like puppy dog eyes big and round.

"Thank you so much," Lily said grinning a little.

Gideons ears turned bright red as red as his hair and Lily's grin turned into rage as she turned to James.

"How dare you do something like that you fool!," She shouted Lily had only been at hogwarts for 2 weeks now but she knew one thing for sure she would always hate that Potter.

James quivered under her glare.
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The next weeks went by quickly and Lily and Gideon had become good friends.

"It's beautiful," said Alice in aw looking at the forest.

It was early october and the leaves turned daring shades of Orange Red and Yellow it looked like someone had spread a large quilt over the forest.

"Lets go and collect some leaves," Lily exclaimed suddenly grabbing Gideon and Alice by the shirts and pulling them to run with her "Ive got a Diary that needs decorating,"

Lily dropped to the ground in a pile of leaves Alice and Gideon doing the same.

"I think this is a nice leaf," Gideon said holding up a shockingly red leaf.

"It's beautiful,"replied Alice

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