HP Avatars + Graphics [Would Love Comments/Critiques + To See Anyone Else's]

[Mrs_D_Malfoy]

of course my Draco love:

and of course some others:

(Ugh! i hate how i had to make his eyes green, they should've come green!!! just another thing wrong w/ the movie )

let me know whatcha think or any suggestions? i'm pretty much addicted to making them
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[leah49]

1. Good job. Wish I could see more of the word "Slytherin" but that's not important.

2. Decent. Needs a border or something.

3. Good images. Good quotes. I think the two images need the same background color. Good icon.

4. Nice. Text needs to be brighter. Nice background.

5, 6, 7. Reaally good.

8. Love it. I think the text should not be touching Umbridge.

9. Perfect.

10. I like it, but the "a" in Bellatrix is hard to see. Great Bellatrix pic.

[Mrs_D_Malfoy]

hey thanks alot!!! those are some really good things to think about, i'll try the ideas on some more

[Mrs_D_Malfoy]

just some new ones:



it was just one of those days ^^^

(it's my Sirius Black [Viggo <3])

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[sllagnire]

I love the look at me one. That is Daniel, right? You change his eye-color? And I think that Viggo would have made an excelent Sirius.

[Mrs_D_Malfoy]

yea it's daniel. i had to change his eye coulour, because they always have his eyes blue, not green lol. i wanted the whole last thing snape ever see to be correct not some blue eye hahaha. and well, sirius is supposed to be rather good looking, and gary oldman just isn't cutting it for me, viggo just seems right, he could even wear his aragorn costume and do it amazingly lol.

[sllagnire]

Originally Posted by Mrs_D_Malfoy

yea it's daniel. i had to change his eye coulour, because they always have his eyes blue, not green lol. i wanted the whole last thing snape ever see to be correct not some blue eye hahaha. and well, sirius is supposed to be rather good looking, and gary oldman just isn't cutting it for me, viggo just seems right, he could even wear his aragorn costume and do it amazingly lol.

Totally agree.

[Mrs_D_Malfoy]

haha yea gary oldman just seems too....old ironically enough lol

[wimblemimble]

I tend to be rather nitpicky, but I’ll throw my critiques out there for you anyway.

Draco, large: The text placement seems a bit off to me. I might have made it slightly smaller and fit the entire thing on his Hogwart’s robe.

Draco, icons, text: It seems that the text is just packed onto these, for the most part, and there isn’t much free space or size/font changes. I would try to experiment more with that and just play around with the text placement. This is a fairly OK guide to making text-only graphics.

Draco, icons, images: First off, ‘evil’ and ‘Draco’ are slightly hard to read. I would either pick a ‘bolder’ font, or work with the image placement so white isn’t on top of white, ect. Second, all of the Draco images are blurry. It is the sort of blurry that you really don’t notice until you sharpen them, and then look at the ‘before’ and ‘after’. Then you can’t help but notice it. And the very tiny Draco in the last icon looks a bit choppy. You cut him out from his background, correct? You may want to go over him with a smudge tool on a low opacity and smooth out the edges.

[Mrs_D_Malfoy]

yea i cut him out, i usually go over the edges, just didn't really feel like it that time lol. thanks for the comments, i'll be sure to check those things out next time i make some

[missmalfoy1]

loved the draco ones!